Intro to the novel I'm trying to get published.

by JeffT 6 Replies latest jw friends

  • JeffT
    JeffT

    I wrote this up today in prepartion for meeting with a writers group. Thought I'd see what you guys think. Anybody know an agent?

    Author’s Introduction to “Armageddon’s Disciples”

    This is a work of fiction, but like all good fiction; it has its roots in the author’s personal experiences.

    In 1973, the year I graduated from Washington State University, I joined a religion. This particular group prides itself on its independence from traditional beliefs, and diligent study of the Bible. Its doctrine centers on apocalyptic predictions of a coming war between God and Satan, and an urgent need to fulfill Jesus’ commission to reach the unsaved.

    Fifteen years later, following a year of investigation and soul searching, my wife and I concluded that we were members of a cult. Actually, sociologists now prefer the term “high control group” as it describes what they do, as opposed to what they believe. This has the advantage of focusing on practices, not theological arguments. We broke free of the religion, but not without personal cost. Some family members (those in the religion) and all of our friends stopped speaking to us.

    We have spoken, from time to time, about our experience. While we can talk about differences in doctrine, or offer up accounts of a busy schedule, I frequently feel as if I am trying to explain the inexplicable. How do otherwise educated and intelligent people (at least that is how we like to think of ourselves) fall for such a religion and then have to struggle to leave it?

    How do seeming nutcases talk people into drinking poisoned Kool-aid, flying airplanes into buildings or selling their daughters into sexual slavery?

    “Armageddon’s Disciples” is an effort to bridge the chasm between normal people and religious fanatics. The milieu of the devout religionist is a sharply different world from the one most people know. To the best of my knowledge, there is no such organization as The Word of God Foundation. However, the language, customs, traditions, doctrines, practices and church discipline of my fictitious religion are reality based.

    Some believers could be your neighbors.

  • Mattieu
    Mattieu

    Sounds like a great read........

    Mattieu.

  • poppers
    poppers

    Love the name of the book, good intro.

  • BurnTheShips
    BurnTheShips
    I wrote this up today in prepartion for meeting with a writers group. Thought I'd see what you guys think. Anybody know an agent?

    Let me ask. I am copying your intro above in an email I am sending to a writer friend. I'll PM you when I get a response later.

    BTS

  • JeffT
    JeffT

    I've created my own religion for a couple of reasons. Mainly I'm taking the whole thing to a place that I don't think (hope? pray?) JW's will ever go. Essentially these people try to kick start Armageddon by attacking the whole world. Also, most of what JW's do isn't very interesting. I do hit a lot of issues that all of us have dealt with in the course of breaking free.

    It might be a way to introduce a non-threatening conversation with some people.

    Burn, thanks.

  • onefootout
    onefootout

    "Mainly I'm taking the whole thing to a place that I don't think (hope? pray?) JW's will ever go."

    Hey, don't give them too many bright ideas! We know they are all out of em at this point.

    ofo

  • JeffT
    JeffT

    This one is done. I'm working on the story board for another one that is set among JW's. Starts with a dead body in a KH and goes from there. I'm also trying to market an alternate history series and I'm about a third of way through an historical novel set in the revolutionary war. I write 500-1000 words a night, for a hobby. Yes, I'm probably crazy.

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