I wrote a poem tonight

by AK - Jeff 4 Replies latest social entertainment

  • AK - Jeff
    AK - Jeff

    Truth and Tequila

    At first it seemed an idea unfettered
    That rose and held his hand.
    It lead him on to test the waters
    Tasting and feeling new land.

    Surely, this teetotaler of past,
    Could not, would not, take such call,
    Allow himself to be so rash
    To take such tempestuous fall.

    From Grace, or so be it named
    Not guiding the ship but letting it tether
    Not keeping within safe shipping lane
    Tossed and rolling, permitting the weather

    To determine the masts' direction and time
    The current to drive, wind to direct
    No watchman at helm to tow a line
    No map or compass to correct.

    His hand wavered as the salt was turned
    With his other he poured it with lust
    Then the lemon to stop the burn
    And then left to the liquors' trust

    He began to waver, to feel less pain
    And rode the wave of freedom at last
    The shot was on the table lain
    And the tequila gone from the glass

    His first shots were fired
    Not just one but three
    His nerves became unwired
    And his smile was glee

    His eyes saw gossamer now
    His lips a song
    He had drank his first strong liquor now
    Nothing wrong

    The perfect world he had prayed and hoped
    Had been a dream, a wasted shell
    But this amber liquid was not a rope
    That would hang him on the way to hell

    It was a soother of man, a Godly gift no doubt
    A comforter, this time it was real
    He could love life while letting it drift
    He finally began to feel.

    The value in life had nothing to do
    With being so perfect, doctrine in tow
    With what one worshiped, believed was true
    Or what one thought he could know

    It was this - a simple act of life
    Feeling and loving, smelling floral scent
    Letting go of the pain and strife
    Knowing life's not for sale - only for rent.

  • YoursChelbie
    YoursChelbie

    Very Nice! How did you get inspired?

    YC

  • AK - Jeff
    AK - Jeff

    Just had some quiet time and started writing.

    I have a darkscreen word processor that allows a minimalist/distraction free page that helps too.

    Jeff

  • AK - Jeff
    AK - Jeff

    And I was reading some Longfellow mariner tomes also.

    Jeff

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    Greetings, Jeff:

    Meaningful and beautifully composed!

    Thanks for sharing ...

    CoCo

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