by New Demosthenes 4 Replies latest social humour
Here is what I had attempted to post.
I'm at work, night shift, and nothing is going on. I thought a comic strip would be an amusing way of telling my story to people outside of this community.
It's a rough draft, I'm open to feedback. If anyone finds it amusing enough I might keep drawing them.
I introduce: Cult Classics (working title)
Don't put the dialogue bubbles over the characters. It makes them hard to read. Notice how they are placed in published comics.
That being said, if you're trying to do satire on JWs, your dialogue isn't very realistic. A JW mom wouldn't tell her daughter to "flirt" or "snuggle" with anyone, even another JW.
Not a one on one satire on Witnesses, just more my experience. My excuse was always that my mother grew up in the world and had a hard time understanding how Witnesses dated. (Not even Witnesses know how Witnesses date.)
I can promise you, the only dialog exaggerated is the "purged" part.
On a side note, as this really happened, I was forced into flirting with him knowing what would happen and was required to break it off when the poor guy was inevitably interested too much by sending him a Youth Book.
Ah memories. *vomit*
