out of nowhere

by SPAZnik 4 Replies latest social entertainment

  • SPAZnik
    SPAZnik

    i knew it was coming
    i saw the red sky

    but it wouldn't be rushed
    it took its sweet time

    pleasantly unpredictable

    out of nowhere

    an eerie quiet
    then suddenly

    thunder. lightening. wind. rain.

    rumble. clap.
    expresses with varying intensity
    that which i cannot

    bolts and flashes
    memories

    whispers of hope
    in the wind through the trees
    a million things

    sight sound smell
    of pelting wind-whipped rain.

    i watch the spectacular disarray
    wonderfully in touch
    i just feel again

    momentarily
    i am lost in my senses
    or is it found?
    the rain subsides.
    the wind settles.
    the birds chirp.

    i am purged.

    i love a storm.

    written by SPAZ

  • SpiceItUp
    SpiceItUp

    Wow..

    that was expressed beautifully.

    Down here in FL we are in rainy season...not to mention I just love a good thunderstorm.

    Spaz- you have talent....please share more.

    Spice

  • Cowboy
    Cowboy

    Very nice,Spaz...

    Cowboy

  • dustrabbit
    dustrabbit

    Hmm, very good, Spaz...I don't normally like poetry, but this one kept me reading to the end.

    but for some reason, i kept picturing the ride of the four horsemen as I was reading this poem. Don't know why, or maybe it was b/c I'm in a gloomy, pissed off mood today...and it's getting hot outside in guangzhou today and I don't think it's gonna rain anytime soon today.

    the dustrabbit

  • SPAZnik
    SPAZnik

    Thx all.

    Interesting review dustrabbit.
    Amazing how the mind works.


    SPAZ

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