SPIRITUAL FEAST

by Larry 4 Replies latest jw friends

  • Larry
    Larry

    When I first came on-line to these kinds of site, I read this poem (c. '97-'98.) I thought it captured the JW world. I never found out who Cyber-Psalmster was/is, but my regards to the talented poet.

    Peace - LL

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    SPIRITUAL FEAST

    By Cyber-Psalmster

    Voices in conversation, meld into an amorphous hum. The whiteness of the

    lies are blinding: "Hello. So nice to see you. I love your dress."

    The blackness of the heart is hidden: "Why are you so annoying? I hate you

    with all my might. When can I leave your presence? I'm getting sick just

    looking at you. Self-righteous pig. Jezebel influence. Vessel for

    dishonorable use. Unspiritual you are. Haughty. Materialistic. Flake. Bad

    Association. You could have pioneered last month like I did, but you decided

    to take a vacation instead."

    Call from the podium. Meeting about to begin. Take our seats like

    ballbearings in a pichinco machine.

    The music arises. A hundred voices whispering familiar melodies they can't

    sing. While one or two of the least endowed bellow the chorus boldly in

    tone-deaf splendor. Take pride. Better sounding to Jehovah than anything in

    Babylon.

    Then prayer. Quiet time. Children looking around in a forest of adults with

    bowed heads. Slap! Slap upside the head. Father was looking too, and saw his

    child, head not bowed. Discipline. Head bowed. Tears on cheek. Jehovah's

    love. Thank you.

    The Amen.

    Meeting is now in God's "care and keeping." Where does he keep it?

    Man at Podium with a Grinch-like grin. Risen. Above the rest. Invites

    answers to his questions.

    But, only answers that he wants. Try to get it right. Think of what he wants

    to hear. Say it.

    Question asked: Arms outstretched in a German salute. Pick me. Pick me. May

    I do my penance.

    Mic handlers scurry like beetles up and down the isles.

    Eyes look over people's shoulders. "So-and-so didn't study." snicker. I

    underlined in florescent colors, 5 of them, so that all may know I studied.

    She studies well. Look at all those colors. Look at all that writing in the

    margins. Spiritual. Yes. Spiritual.

    Read from the paragraph, see how best to rearrange the words. What did I

    underline? Oh. What am I supposed to say? Oh yes. Now read. Now paraphrase.

    Thank you very much sister. Oh no. I read one sentence too many and answered

    the next question. The shame. The embarrassment. Must read the correct

    sentence.... Must stay in the arrangement....

    The colors ran through to the other side.

    Conductor thrown off track. Asks an already answered question. One day, I'll

    be a master commentor. I will quote from old Watchtowers, and the Insight

    Book, and impress-people with page numbers and dates. Spiritual. Yes.

    Spiritual.

    Next paragraph.

    Rinse, Lather, Repeat.

    Keep up with the Chariot.

    The light is getting brighter as Armageddon is getting closer. It won't be

    long now.

    Such timely information. Just what we need.

    They are giving us our food at the right time. Such a faithful slave. It's

    Jehovah's Food. Listen to what it says.

    May we continue to go in service.

    May we continue to avoid bad association. May we continue to be magazine

    conscious.

    May we continue to support Jehovah with our valuable things. May we continue

    to avoid the spirit of the world.

    May we continue to not misuse blood.

    May we continue to be obedient to those taking the lead.

    Concluding remarks. Ain't this the best Watchtower Study ever? Yes, it is.

    So encouraging. Such fine information. The Brothers sure know how to give us

    what we need at the right time.

    Hum of conversations rise after the last amen, like the sound of many

    waters. That was a fine talk. I enjoyed your handling of the lesson. I

    enjoyed your comment. It was very fine. It was very encouraging. No where

    else can we get this fine information that is so encouraging. Oh did I say

    it was fine information? The articles just get better and better. More

    encouraging, and more fine.

    Listen in on a conversation...

    Listen...

    Listen...

    "So nice to see you."

  • Fire Dragon
    Fire Dragon

    Hot damn!! Nail on the head.

    I feel like I just attended a meeting....shudder to think. Shake it off....

    -Fire

  • zenpunk
    zenpunk

    This poem is fantastic! You get the entire desparate effect! Do you have any others?

  • SYN
    SYN

    OMG! What an incredibly moving piece of writing! That captured the spirit perfectly!

  • abbagail
    abbagail

    The author forgot to mention the roar of laughter after the meeting coming from a huddle of elders over in the far corner of the Hall... seems they just decided to let the pedophile stay in...

    BwaaaaaaaHaHaHaHaHa!!! they all roared in unison...

    Seven-year-old Timothy tugging on their pants leg, "What so funny Bro Joe, Bro John, Bro Pete???"

    "Oh nothing at all, Young Brother Timothy... this is grown-up laughter, something you wouldn't understand... run along now and go welcome Bro Beliz back to the congregation, as he's not been feeling well lately..."
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    Seriously, LL, that is a true piece of work, which some dub put much thought into... brought some great chuckles to these cheeks. :-) Thank you. The colorful descriptions were priceless: ...beetles in the aisles... forest of adults.... arms outstretched in German salute... rinse, lather, repeat... LOL! I, too, wonder what happened to this Cyber-Psalmster... wonder what they are doing now...

    That sis with the 5 flourescent highlighters running through the page, ummmmm <cough, choke> that would be me..... As the years went on, I got worse and worse (overdoing it more and more, like an out of control Accent Highlighter with a mind of its own). Must have been that "never good enough" feeling driving me... True Confessions: Saw a shrink for a few years after my dub years. When I would give him copies of medical articles and such, all underlined with stars and exclamation points in the margins, he would marvel and say he's never seen anybody underline as much as I did. After a few times of hearing that, I was fed up, so I told him (which was true), "I never started doing that until I became a Jehovah's Witness. Everybody did the same thing." He said, "Well, I bet the rest of them didn't underline to the extent that you do..." Hmmmmm.... anybody wanna make a bet? ;-)

    Grits

    Edited by - Grits on 30 July 2002 5:32:21

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