Edgar (the Crow) Colludes with the *Russians*

by TerryWalstrom 8 Replies latest jw friends

  • TerryWalstrom
    TerryWalstrom

    A couple of years ago, sitting at Starbucks outside patio, I became "aware" of a feathered Mafioso I eventually named EDGAR.
    So weird and varied have been our adventures, I began writing about them.
    This is only the latest installment in what I like to call: THE EDGAR CHRONICLES
    _______
    EDGAR COLLUDES with the ROOSKIES

    I sit carefully selecting which words to use--there are pitfalls to my tale.

    2 Chinese ladies are problematic for a writer who is an Olde White Male.

    What if I accidentally stereotype? I dare not!

    With your kind permission, I will change the sex and country of origin of my 2 characters to avoid going off the rails.
    Instead, this story is transformed into 2 *Russian* guys!
    Ha! I can’t possibly go wrong...can I?
    ________

    The Setting: Starbucks (of course.)

    I’m seated close to the window with a full view of my bicycle, the sidewalk and alfresco tables and chairs. It's a patio.

    Munitio 9mm earbuds are stuck inside my ears like bolts in Frankenstein’s neck.
    My latest “mixtape” fires up and waves of serenity soothe my interior.

    Now--this much you need to know before I continue...

    1. Edgar will arrive and I’ll catch him messing with my bike.

    2. A middle-aged *Russian guy* wearing a body-hugging cheongsam is sitting at the next table in a loud cell phone conversation.

    Okay? Got that?
    We begin.

    My black-feathered Nemesis sees that I have him under surveillance.
    Lately, since it’s too hot for me outside, I’ve neglected to feed Edgar his favorite cashews
    (or anything else) a few times.
    What can I say?--it’s a tough world.

    He’s pissed.
    Naturally, this requires teaching me a lesson.

    Edgar has been ruining my genuine leather bike seat with his weapon of choice: bird beak. When I catch him--he stops, nonchalantly gazing about, the very picture of innocence.

    Off to my right, the loud and strange (to my ears) accent of the excited *Russian guy* penetrates my consciousness. My sleeve is tugged.
    *The Russian guy* is standing next to me with *his* phone extended toward my face.

    “You help me--no?”
    “Um, I help you--yes.”

    “My friend lost. Can’t find me. Need directions. You help--no?”
    “I help--yes.”
    _____

    Next thing you know, I’m pressing the *Russian guy's* smartphone against my dumb ear trying to sort out the *Russian* voice on the other end. Believe me: NOT easy.

    “Can you tell me exactly where you are right now?” I yelled into the phone.
    (Note: studies have shown the best way to make yourself understood to a foreign-born person is to speak louder.)

    “I lost.” (The voice on the phone.)

    “That’s not very helpful. Are you in an automobile?”

    “No. I’m driving car. I lost.”

    “Right. You’re lost. Okay. Describe things around you and I can help.”

    “Steering wheel. Clock. Seat covers…”

    “No-no-no, OUTSIDE the car. What do you see OUTSIDE?”

    “Traffic. Too much. Building. Street…”

    “Hold on--read the signs on the buildings for me.”
    _____

    At this point, progress is made.
    I quickly determine the lost *Russian fella* is only two blocks from Starbucks.
    Carefully, I dictate extremely detailed directions again and again.
    Finally, I hand the phone back to the *Russian guy* in the tight fitting skirt.
    The expression on *his* face is alarmed.
    What have I done wrong?

    “Look, Crow on bicycle!” (*He* is pointing excitedly and quite upset.)

    “Yes, I know. That’s Edgar and he’s a real pain in my ...well, he’s up to no good.”

    “Crow bad luck before business meeting! Go--chase him away! Chase him now!”
    ____
    The *Russian guy* is ordering me around like I’m being paid for such services.

    Rather than argue, (or get myself in deeper doo-doo with the feathered Nemesis) I buy a snack and deliver outside.
    Edgar looks very pleased with the quick results of his malicious mischief.
    As he gobbles his muffin, I examine the cracked rip in my seat. Infuriating!

    Presently, I returned inside just as the "lost" companion arrives safe and sound.
    I know what you're thinking.

    The 2 *Russian guys* will probably want to thank me for making their lives easier--right?
    Think again!

    “You crazy feed Crow! One Crow bad luck. Only Crow with baby Good Luck.”
    I ignore this ingratitude.

    “You’re welcome. I see you got here okay following my instructions.”

    “No. I see cop and ask him--he tell me right way. You direction stink. I stay lost forever.”
    ____

    At this juncture, all I can do is give up.
    I ignore the 2 of them and get back to my mixtape.

    Ten minutes later, both *Russian guys* are now asking where is a good place to go for lunch.

    I decided to let Siri make the suggestion.
    I punch "Nearby Restaurants" into my iPhone map and up pops a Chinese Buffet for my 2 *Russians*.

    Oh, the look of disgust!
    ____

    “That’s racist!” the 2 *Russians* snorted indignantly.
    They huffed and puffed, gathered up their things and departed.

    I stood there like the loser I am scratching my head.
    I watch them walking out to a car. The car has a Crow sitting on the hood--like an ornament.
    It is Edgar, of course.
    Now the crazy antics commence!

    Imagine in your mind's eye:

    2 crazed *Russians* are waving their arms about screaming at Edgar in garbled English in high-pitched voice--practically hysterical.

    Our beloved Crow stays put ignoring them.
    This continues.
    I watched for ten minutes. Strangely satisfying, though.

    Finally, they gave up and CAME BACK inside Starbucks and sat down next to me once more.

    I groaned. My intuition is whispering to me. Sure enough…

    “You make Crow go away! That YOU CROW. You responsible!”

    Can you believe this?

    I didn’t argue. I’m not that stupid.
    I got ANOTHER snack and sat outside next to my bicycle.
    His Majesty flies over and I feed him.

    The 2 indignant *Russian guys* quickly scurried to the car and drove off practically peeling rubber.

    I stared into those scheming yellow eyes of his as Edgar munched his second muffin.
    I growled indignantly at him:

    "THIS YOU FAULT. YOU BAD LUCK!"

    I used a racist *Russian* accent.

    So, sue me!
    _______

    collage art

  • scary21
    scary21

    You made my day LMAO

  • under the radar
    under the radar

    At least those mentally diseased Russians didn't wear that getup and try to infiltrate a prom somewhere, brazenly flouting their own culture in a cynical attempt to offend peace-loving gyno-Americans. (Chortle, chortle!)

    Another great tale, Terry! May the Great Edgar and his humble chronicler live on to time indefinite, regaling us with tales of derring-do or something like that. Salaam, Salaam.

  • TerryWalstrom
    TerryWalstrom

    The weird part of being joined at the hip with a bird is: it has normalized.
    Nothing astonishes me any longer.
    Why, me--Oh Lord? Who knows?
    Perhaps birdbrains of a feather are fated to flock together...

  • Listener
    Listener

    I have to agree with them. Suggesting that male Russians are only interested in buffets is racist. It's probably sexist as well.

  • TerryWalstrom
    TerryWalstrom

    Not to mention the obvious Thought Crimes of which I'm complicit.
    My venality has no bounds.

  • Nathan Natas
    Nathan Natas

    T, you're gonna HATE me for this - I hate myself for doing it!

    How to serve EDGAR

  • TerryWalstrom
    TerryWalstrom

    A practical suggestion I can't wait to try!

  • Nathan Natas
    Nathan Natas

    Come the Grand Revelation, you'll be eatin' crow, Dude!

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