Poem

by philo 5 Replies latest jw friends

  • philo
    philo

    Just when you have it
    You've learned the law
    And turn to your heart
    And the mind of Christ
    Something changes and so must you

    The progressive organisation
    The ambitious body administers
    Its latest nuance for assimilation
    For your praise
    For your agreement and assent

    Command upon command
    Command upon command

    Now the man is put on hold
    Maintain the machine
    Another Christ stands
    Demands your attention
    Through pages of convolutions

    Always new, good news
    To keep in step with
    Reports from better places
    More honest hearted natives
    With fresh smiling innocence

    Measuring line upon measuring line
    Measuring line upon measuring line

    Where else are you to go?
    Here is the pasture and the rain
    Here the fence and shut gate
    And the warm exhalations
    Of fermenting ruminants

    New grass, fresh green stems
    Growing while you eat
    New green truth to rip and chew
    Before it turns to straw
    Spoilt for green, green choice

    Look here! It says, and look there!
    So you look and you wonder a little
    But the grazing herd lows approval
    Trying to think a little
    But it's, Look here! Look there!

    Here a little, here a little
    There a little, there a little

    philo (no really)

  • JanH
    JanH

    The Incarnate One

    The windless northern surge, the sea-gull's scream,
    And Calvin's kirk crowning the barren brae.
    I think of Giotto the Tuscan shepherd's dream,
    Christ, man and creature in their inner day.
    How could our race betray
    The Image, and the Incarnate One unmake
    Who chose this form and fashion for our sake?

    The Word made flesh here is made word again
    A word made word in flourish and arrogant crook.
    See there King Calvin with his iron pen,
    And God three angry letters in a book,
    And there the logical hook
    On which the Mystery is impaled and bent
    Into an ideological argument.

    There's better gospel in man's natural tongue,
    And truer sight was theirs outside the Law
    Who saw the far side of the Cross among
    The archaic peoples in their ancient awe,
    In ignorant wonder saw
    The wooden cross-tree on the bare hillside,
    Not knowing that there a God suffered and died.

    The fleshless word, growing, will bring us down,
    Pagan and Christian man alike will fall,
    The auguries say, the white and black and brown,
    The merry and the sad, theorist, lover, all
    Invisibly will fall:
    Abstract calamity, save for those who can
    Build their cold empire on the abstract man.

    A soft breeze stirs and all my thoughts are blown
    Far out to sea and lost. Yet I know well
    The bloodless word will battle for its own
    Invisibly in brain and nerve and cell.
    The generations tell
    Their personal tale: the One has far to go
    Past the mirages and the murdering snow.

    - Edwin Muir

    - Jan
    --
    Faith, n. Belief without evidence in what is told by one who speaks without knowledge, of things without parallel. [Ambrose Bierce, The DevilĀ“s Dictionary, 1911]

  • philo
    philo

    Jan
    Is the man
    Speaks a fan

    Thought or quote
    Most every post
    He wrote

    But lark or crow
    On I go
    Philo

  • mommy
    mommy

    This is a true blue poem I wrote years ago, almost days before I left the org. I kept it and look at it often, reminding me of where I once was.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    shut the windows, shut the door
    close the shades, don't live no more
    Stop eating, stop your drinking

    Because you can't live without love

    Stop breathing, stop talking
    stop laughing stop crying
    stop feeling, stop your heart

    because you can't live without love

    you are dead inside
    no matter what you try
    it's not worth your tears
    you are gonna die

    They don't love
    then you can't love

    they give hate
    so you take hate

    Theres no longer love
    all thats left is hate

    So why try
    just die
    because you can't live without love.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Gee, I can't believe I am posting that. I have only shown maybe four people in my life that poem. But I just thought it appropriate now.
    wendy

  • philo
    philo

    Mommy

    Thanks for posting. Here's something from a bad time in my life.

    I abhor this inner man
    Who other can I blame
    Revealing who I really am
    Igniting in me evil flame

    When weak and drained,
    He comes for me
    With friendship feigned
    His scheme to see
    A vulgar thirst
    A hateful glee
    A thing accursed
    He'll have me be

    ---------

    Ain't it lovely how THEY can make you feel?

    philo

    "God this, God that, and God the other thing."

  • mommy
    mommy

    Thanks Philo,
    I feel much better about posting mine nowYour poem is very well written, and I really enjoyed it. I know how they can make you feel, but only if you let them. I am so thankful for walking away when I did.
    wendy

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