Chapter One of my New Novel "New Boy"

by new boy 7 Replies latest jw friends

  • new boy
    new boy

    Chapter 1

    The Pledge

    La Fretra elementary school, Mrs. Mallet’s third grade class, Glendora California 1957.

    All the children are starting their school day by standing facing the American flag with one hand by their sides and one hand on their hearts. Mrs. Mallet an attractive thirty five year old with thick black hair and glasses turns and faces the class.

    With a stern look she starts the pledge. “I pledge allegiance to the flag of the united states of…” The whole class chimes in. All the children except for Keith. Keith stands there, with both arms by his side and says nothing. He has kind of a frown on his face as rest of the kids go through the motions of saluting the flag. The pledge is over and all the children sit back down at their desks. Mrs. Mallet turns from facing the flag. “Class before we start our class today we will be having Susan’s birthday party, who would like to help with the cake and ice cream?” The kids throw up their hands with excitement. Keith squirms in his set and says nothing. Mrs. Mallet has a big smile on her face as she looks Keith’s way. Keith would you like to be excused from the birthday party?

    Keith nods his head, as if to say yes. He stands up from his chair. Mrs. Mallet “Then... you may leave and set in the hallway until we are done. I will come and get you when the fun is over.”

    Mrs. Mallet really doesn’t like Keith. Him, or his whack job of mother or their stupid religion. Her husband fought in the war and got half his leg blown off on Iwo Jima, so people like Keith and his mother could enjoy religious freedom in this country. How dare he stand there and not respect the flag that gave them that freedom! “The little shit.” She thought to herself. She was really happy he couldn’t be at Susan’s birthday party. It was fun to see the little bastard suffer.

    Keith walks to the classroom door and turns to look at the birthday cake on the teacher’s desk. He then turns to see many of kids in the classroom with their eyes on him as he walks out the door. Keith walks a few steps and sits down on concrete walkway next to the classroom door. After a minute he can hear through the door the noise of the birthday party going on inside the classroom and finally the happy birthday song for Susan. Keith has a tear in his eye. Twenty minutes later Mrs. Mallet opens the door and steps in the hallway.

    “Keith we’re done now you may come back in.” Keith stands up and walks back into the classroom. Many kids look at Keith as he walks back into the classroom. Kids are walking up to a waste paper basket and throwing their used papers plates away. Keith looks over to where the birthday cake was to see a pile of crumbs. Susan is licking her spoon with the pink frosting on it. She looks at Keith and sticks her tongue out at him. Keith sheepishly walks back to his seat and sits down.

    “Alright kids everyone get back to your seats. Today we are going to talk about the greatest man in American history... George Washington and we going to talk about how the United States of America is the greatest country in the World.”

    Keith looks up at the clock on the wall, still two hours more before recess. The bell finally rings and the kids jump out of seats to get their lunch boxes.

    Keith sits on the end of the table by himself and eats his baloney sandwich in the cafeteria. Sometimes kids will sit with him but mostly he sits by himself. He thinks about what his mother told him. “Keith, it’s better to be lonely, then be in bad company.”

    A few minutes later he is in the school yard, watching two boys playing tether ball. Susan and another girl walk up to Keith. “So why wouldn’t you come to my birthday party Keith? You’re weird!” I’m not weird it’s my religion.” Keith fires back.

    Susan smiles. “Oh Really? Then your religion is weird.”

    “It’s not weird. You’re be sorry for saying that one day!”

    “Oh really. Well, I think your religion is stupid and you are stupid too.”

    Keith turns and walks away.

    The girls follow him, announcing “Keith’s religion is stupid. Keith’s religion is stupid!”

  • sparky1
    sparky1

    BEEN THERE, DONE THAT.

    Great story so far, I look forward to your continuing saga.......................

  • Barrold Bonds
    Barrold Bonds
    Are you seriously writing a novel? That's really bad. Like, worse than the worst stuff you'll find on Amazon.
  • NeverKnew
    NeverKnew

    I say go for it New Boy!

    It seems like many JWs I know would relate so far.

    Hopefully the intended audience is JWs AND non-JWs. I'm trying to get these types of books under the noses of non-jws these days.

  • stephanie61092
    stephanie61092

    I can totally relate to all of this. I was the weird girl who was always pointed at for not saluting the flag. I was the loser who sat outside while they sang "happy birthday". My go to line was "it's against my religion." Sigh... All of the sad memories brought back so fresh and harsh.

  • gma-tired2
    gma-tired2
    Brought tears to my eyes. I had many similar experiences, I believe we never entirely leave them behind. They are still with me at 68 as they are still with Keith.
  • Introvert 2
    Introvert 2

    Right on Keith I logged in just to say YEAH go for it ! It's going to make for fine reading and you may very well help some people see the religious business cult inc. for what it really is ! The New Boy stories were great, I'm sure you have lots of untapped material on hand as well. Looking forward to it. Rocket Man / Mad Man Across The Water

  • Clearview
    Clearview
    Yep, that brought back some memories, been out almost 9 years and the happy birthday song still makes me feel uncomfortable and left out, stupid cult.

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