The Unbarred Gate

by Euphemism 6 Replies latest jw friends

  • Euphemism
    Euphemism

    This is a poem I wrote while Piph and I were on honeymoon. I don't claim that it's a good poem, but I'm trying to be more open about my feelings, so I thought I'd share it. So please bear with me.

    THE UNBARRED GATE

    Love was held back from me
    By a gate I could not see
    My hand would bump against it
    As I tried to see behind it

    They did not want to put it there
    It came from their own souls
    From the lacking deep within them
    From the force of famine's habit

    Now as the gate cracks open
    I see the sun shine bright
    And ache for all the years I spent
    Hiding from the light

    And although blue skies hurt my eyes
    And burn my tender skin
    My heart pushes me through the door
    That my life might begin

  • ros
    ros

    Beautiful analogy, Euph.

    ~Ros

  • Joyzabel
    Joyzabel

    Lovely Euph.

    Welcome home and congratulations on your wedding. (you & Piph)

    j2bf

    and welcome to the board, if I haven't said that to you before.

  • Enishi
    Enishi

    Great poetry!

  • Mulan
    Mulan

    Ros!!!! I miss you!!

  • Piph
    Piph

    I loved it then and I loved it now.

  • Badger
    Badger

    Young love....

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