I try my hand at poetry

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  • Liberated
    Liberated

    In Their Clutches (or A Parent's Remorse)

    Young, soft, pliable
    The hook sinks deep
    Eager to please
    Weighted with guilt
    Bright young smiles
    Slapped into submission
    Wide innocent eyes
    Hollowed out from fear
    Supple little hands
    Gripped in desperate appeal
    Eager for life
    Shamed into flight
    Run for a while
    The hook is still there
    Freedom in sight………..
    The line pulls tight
    Snagged, trapped, ensnared
    The hook sunk deep.
    (I know. I helped set it)
    -----------------------------------
    We Are The Child Abusers

    We took our children there
    We slapped and spanked
    At the back of the hall
    We fitted them to the yoke
    (The one we could hardly bare)
    We pressured and forced
    And withheld our love
    Until square little pegs
    Fitted into rounded places
    And we looked good.

    We lost their love
    We lost their trust
    We lost our children
    As surely as if we had been
    The ones abusing them.
    ------------------------
    Lost Childhood Complete
    The instrument that smoothed away your softness
    Was the rasp of my anger and withheld love
    The blades that etched the pain in your heart
    Were the knife-like words I did not keep back.
    The ruler that measured your every deed
    Left you feeling your best was never enough.
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  • goo
    goo

    hi liberated, thanks for the poems, i think you got the message of your pain and guilt and remorse across in them - hope it all works out - i think the same feelings may apply to those we helped bring into the "truth" as well - i know they certainly do for me - they may even apply to the child of my own self spirit within as well - sure seems that way at least.

    looking forward to more.

    goo.

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