A little bit of poetry

by Darkangel 9 Replies latest jw friends

  • Darkangel
    Darkangel

    Something to pass the time
    Something to record the words and thoughts
    we've all been victims of crimes
    Looking through the looking glass
    seeing another girl looking back out of a face I once knew
    Another face of the past

    Turning away to face the soul
    a window left open and it began to rain
    there's nothing left to make me whole
    Seeing pain in all the faces
    Crowded streets filled and overflowing
    to empty alleys and abandoned places

    What is left from what once was
    there is nothing left but ghosts
    I'm haunted by the memory of you

    Feel free to post some poetry and writings, thoughts and expressions. I love to chat with the creative. :)
    I'm not as depressing as my writing, needless to say.

    Angel

  • Seeker
    Seeker

    Hi Angel,

    I'm not as frivolous as my picture, needless to say...

    Your poetry (song lyric?) was beautiful and haunting. I was immediately reminded of another song I once heard by the Techno group Mono, called Slimcea Girl. The lyrics have a similar haunting reminisce of the past:

    As she walked down the street
    The rain began to fall
    He called out
    But she passed on by
    Like she never noticed him at all

    Then the words of the song
    Remind her of those days
    Sees herself in the face of a stranger
    Sat in a Station Road Cafe

    She remembers the day
    When things were going her way
    Only memories remain of

    The way she used to be
    Way she used to be

    She stays home every night
    And exagerates her past
    Now he knows
    That slimcea girl
    And she lives alone in Prozac Park

    All the old photographs
    Were never thrown away
    She looks through them
    For what made her cry
    And then she decides live for today

    She remembers the day
    When things were going her way
    Only memories remain of

    The way she used to be
    Way she used to be

  • Darkangel
    Darkangel

    Seeker,

    That was a lovely quote. I posted some of VNV Nation on another thread in the hopes it would bring some peace to the discussion board. Nothing like a song to put everything into another perspective, eh?

    Here's some more poetry for ya, this one's from The Cure:

    She walked out of her house and looked around at all the gardens that looked back at her house
    Like all the faces that quiz when you smile
    and he was standing at the corner where the road turned dark
    a part of shiny wet
    like blood the rain fell black down on the street
    and kissed his feet she fell her head an inch away from heaven
    and her face pressed tight and all around the night sang out like cockatoos

    There are a thousand things he said I'll never say those things to you again
    and turning on his heel he left a trace of bubbles bleeding in his stead
    and in her head
    a picture of a boy who left her lonely in the rain
    and all around the night sang out like cockatoos

    I love that song. It's so swirling and melodic that it draws you in and makes you a part of it.

    Here's a lil something I wrote, just to sign off with:

    The feeling of empitness filled
    left me breathless
    panting in the humid air
    lungs gasping as I was shown a piece of what heaven could be

    Souls twined together in barbed wire and the lust for an emotion other than hate and regret
    Soaring over city streets, waiting for the night
    when we meet again
    and turn from one another
    like the night never happened
    And always left with the realm of a "what if"

    Angel

  • outcast
    outcast

    That was very beautiful. But we have a Art, literature and music section on this forum.

    outcast
    <of the wannabe moderator class>

  • Darkangel
    Darkangel

    A little clarification...

    I guess I can see how this could be mistaken as a solely poetry type of thing, I did post as a little bit of poetry, afterall.
    I would like to chat with creative types, and poetry and prose is a good way of bringing people in and getting a discussion going about life in general.
    So, mainly I guess what I'm doing a terrible job of saying is, if poetry is the way you communicate, feel free to put it that way. If song lyrics are the way you communicate, feel free to post them. If you just feel like rambling off your emotions, feel free. Philosophy is the child of Poetry, and vice versa. :)

    At the moment, my outlook is a relatively cheerful one. My writing can't exactly be called "poetry" anyway. :) It's more free-form mental spewings.

    So, what thoughts do y'all have on life in general? Brushes with death, etc.? I have a few stories, if you'd like to hear them.

    Angel

  • Big Jim
    Big Jim

    This Is a Poem I Posted Last Week.

    The Truth (my poem) Jun 15, 2001 3:11:18 PM

    --------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    The truth is something that was built on guilt and fear.
    Your going to rot in hell son, you know the end is near.
    You better pay your dues if you want to be blessed.
    And if you fall in to sin, to the elders, not God you must confess.

    You better go to the meetings three days a week.
    And you better knock them doors you better hit that street.

    We need you to come Sunday to help clean up the hall.
    I will vacume the carpet,you can clean the bathroom stalls.

    The elders preach from the stage, do you think you could do more?
    And you cannot forget that they are keeping the score.

    They say you got to do more because we are living in tne time of the end.
    Dont you want to live forever with all of the friends.

    You know what I say is that they can take all there fear and stick it up there ass.
    Because I am out and free finally at last.

  • Darkangel
    Darkangel

    Big Jim,

    I like it. I like it a lot. :)
    It frames the hypocrisy and ultimate brain-washing that happens, not just in JW society, but in most other religions. The sense of freedom is wonderful and frightening. Wonderful because you open your eyes in the morning and know that you won't ever have to answer to anyone if you don't want to. Frightening because you open your eyes in the morning and realise there's no more opinions being forced on you, and you get to form your own... It's like waking up from a terrible nightmare and you have to keep checking under the bed to make sure none of it has followed you into the waking world.
    Bravo!! Encore!

    Angel

  • Darkangel
    Darkangel

    OK.. Some more words, actually by request. :)

    This is something I read a while back, and the quote is powerful.
    It's taken from Jonathan Livingston Seagull by Richard Bach

    "The last point was the telling one, and Sullivan was right. 'The gull sees farthest who flies highest.'"

    Ultimately, this could be a mantra. By getting above the problems, we can see all of the possibilities.
    If you haven't read the book, then I highly recommend it.

    Life in general throws a lot at you, but it's all in how we perceive the situation that lets us solve the issues at hand. When we get "above" the problem, we get to see all the aspects of the problem, and then we get to see how it's solved. It's a matter of separating ourselves from our own day-to-day run-around.

    There's my tidbit du jour.
    :) Hope it helps to solve someone's problem today. :)

    Angel

  • Music Mouth
    Music Mouth

    For the bored.
    For the board.
    From the greatest.
    Songster.
    You really need to hear it.
    Till then, read it.

    ------------------------------------------------------------------

    People who are sad - sometimes they wear a frown
    And people who are kings - sometimes they wear a crown
    But all the people who don't fit
    Get the only fun they get
    From people puttin' people down
    People puttin' people down

    People without love - sometimes build a fence around
    The garden up above - that makes the whole world go 'round
    But all the people who don't fit
    Get the only fun they get
    From people puttin' people down
    People puttin' people down

    So cold, sometimes it gets so cold

    You may love your wife - you may lose your family
    You may lose you mind - just to keep your sanity
    But the people who don't fit
    Get the only fun they get
    From people puttin' people down
    People puttin' people down

    People that are glad - sometimes they wear a smile
    And people without dreams they walk the extra mile
    But all the people who don't fit
    Get the only fun they get
    From people puttin' people down
    People puttin' people dwn
    From people puttin' people down
    People puttin' people down

    So cold, sometimes it gets so cold

  • Darkangel
    Darkangel

    MM:

    Great words. Who is that one by?

    Angel

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