Wow it took you six years to come up with that!
It's just as if you have never read the OP.
However to get just the first two words together “When Shall” the odds become exponentially more difficult.
From the OP..
Imagine our 10,000 monkeys randomly typing until one of them by pure chance comes up with "When.."
At that point all the other pages are scrapped and every monkey is given a copy of this page. We observe some more until another monkey adds "shall.." and so on through thousands of iterations. How long would it take to achieve "When shall we three meet again? In thunder, lightning, or in rain?" Completing the full play now becomes inevitable....
The illustration is also misleading because it assumes there is an end product that we are hoping to achieve. This is sometimes referred to as the teleological fallacy. Evolution had no purpose in mind. It isn't trying to produce Macbeth or build a human. Whatever works is favoured by natural selection - from bacteria to beetles, it doesn't care.