From what you've said it sounds like it would 50 pages, no one will read that. It even seemed like it was too much already for some. Maybe ive failed in your opinion? Im not trying to totally destroy the JWs faith, but just put questions in their head, so this is why cite verses and leave it open ended. And you are right about things like "How Does Jehovah View Those Outside The Organization" it is not a proof text, because JWs think all of that applies to them, in fact most every scripture, same as the false teachers ones, they would say thats talking about everyone what them. So im well aware of this. Its meant to try and be simple, and make someone question without putting it in the trash.
Again maybe ive failed? This is the best i can do...
Im interested what others think, should i just trash it and give up? Or what?