This history of the watchtower (in comic verse)

by Naeblis 15 Replies latest jw friends

  • Naeblis
    Naeblis

    I wrote this about 4-5 years ago as I was pulling myself out of the JW's. It's not GREAT but it has it's moments and it makes me smile. Enjoy :)

    Once upon a time, many days and years ago
    was a people that professed that the future they did know
    and they proudly walked in strides and their eyes they kept high
    and with confidence and surety they said that Christ was nigh
    1874 they said. It came and went. Goodbye!

    Well the wisdom of these people quickly found out their mistake
    A small faux pas in numbers proved their judgement to be fake
    and they proudly walked in strides and their eyes they kept high
    and with confidence and surety they said that Christ was nigh
    1884 they said (10 years later) but it came and went! Goodbye!

    Well now some people were confused and others still were mad
    and loud became the murmerings of those that had been had
    And the leader of this charming group knew something he must tell
    so in the year 1914 he smiled, the world will go to HELL!!!
    It came and went, surprise again, and nothing happened then

    "Well shit," said Russel in dismay, "can't a prophet get a break??"
    "I don't ask for much," he sighed aloud, "just for a prophecy to take."
    Now here an idea formed in his head and he knew just what to do
    "I'll combine the other prophecies with this last one that I blew!"
    "1914," he said, "what I REALLY meant, was that Christ came back to Earth"

    The embarassment to Russel was as large as was his pride
    so soon thereafter on a train he went and promptly died
    and the people cried and the people wailed and the people picked again
    and a newer (drunker) man stepped forward to wield the prophet pen

    Rutherford was this fine man's name (though he WAS a little crazy)
    he said "Prophets on a roll just can't afford to become lazy!"
    And he took out the red prophet pen and said with an impish grin
    "in 1925 the old prophets will return to clear our sins!"
    1925 was it, it came and went, well fucking shit

    Doctrine came and doctrine went and doctrine came again
    Vaccines are evil! Wait they're not! Wait yes they are my friend!
    Organ transplants!?!? Christ! My lord! To use anothers heart????
    You'd be better off to do your shopping at the Human Mart!
    (Cannibalism you see) Oh my!

    Of course this all would seem bizarre to those who read it now
    For to see the truth your faithful and discreet slave won't allow
    But out again came the prophet pen and a newer tale was spun
    For in 1975 (for sure) this wicked world is done!!
    It came and went..yet again..that fucking pen!!!

    Deny, deny, deny again, was the strategy employed
    "We never said in 1975 the world would be destroyed!"
    "YOU must have made this up,"they said, "WE never said we knew."
    So why did so many people leave if what they said is true??

    For now the prophet pen is dry, dates retired too
    but the end is ever close my friend its wrath you'll come to rue!
    I hope this poem has helped you see that God he never lies
    and why the "Truth" is hardly that
    And why my faith now dies.

  • jayhawk1
    jayhawk1

    Excuse me while I copy this and send it to my mother. Very good!

    "Hand me that whiskey, I need to consult the spirit."-J.F. Rutherford

  • bitter mango
    bitter mango

    ~bravo naeblis, bravo~

    i know the pieces fit because i watched them fall away...

  • Nathan Natas
    Nathan Natas

    Nicely done, Father Naeblis. Can "Cardinal" Naeblis be far away? Or "Capo Del Tutti Capo" Naeblis?

    (oops! I'm in Sopranos withdrawal!)

    I've often wondered if at it's heart the WTB&TS is a "hundredth monkey" organization. What if, at their heart, they believe that once their organization reaches a certain "critical mass" the combined mental energies of those believers would, in itself, bring about the end of the world that they are predicting? There are occult teachings about the power of combined thoughts... a million minds, all thinking , "Armagedon... Armageddon..."

    ...or was that just an "Outer Limits" program I heard while sleeping in front of the TV?

  • StifflersErSlayersBrother
    StifflersErSlayersBrother

    OMG, thats awesome Naeb man. Truely awesome, If my poetry loving girlfriend werent still a dub, Im sure she'd love this too man. Im savin this.

  • CornerStone
    CornerStone

    Hello Naeblis,

    I don't mean to take from your creativity but here's a little verse you could add to your work:

    "The Generation" prophecy has been spoken in the street. Those who saw 1914 will stay til' this system is complete.
    A generations 80 years, in 94' Uh Oh! it came and gone. What to say, what to say to the faithful sheep. "Guess what folks? "NEW LIGHTS FLASHED FORTH!", See, we NEVER get it wrong."

    CornerStone

  • Naeblis
    Naeblis

    Hmm. It's been five years. Lots to update. Thanks! :P

  • Kat_
    Kat_

    If I may echo mango: Bravo!

    Fabulous

    Kat

  • Shaneliza
    Shaneliza

    Awesome Naeblis !!!!!
    You have a talent....I'm saving your poem, hope you don't mind.

  • Mommie Dark
    Mommie Dark

    !!!!!!!!!

    Hilarious! I'm sending this one off to my brother...

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