My Story, in verse

by dedpoet 18 Replies latest jw experiences

  • dedpoet
    dedpoet

    I don't know if anyone is still reading this epic, but if you are, you will surely be relieved to know that this is the 5th, and final. part.

    November 1999- July 2005 - Fading and Disassociation

    So began the battle to leave my past behind
    For though I'd freed my body, I had not freed my mind
    I no longer believed in anything I'd learned
    But the years of indoctrination robbed me of the peace I yearned
    The bonds could not be broken quickly, however hard I tried
    So the total freedom I sought continued to be denied
    The brothers tried to draw me back, but I knew I could not go
    Back to their deceptive teachings which had once hurt me so

    As the years passed by though, I began to heal
    The longer since I'd walked away, the better I would feel
    The elders bid to win me back finally became nought
    So now I could enjoy the peace which I'd for so long sought
    That I knew I had at last obtained, for now I'd freed my mind
    From all the lies and deceit, I'd left it long behind
    And although my freedom had a price, as most of the friends I'd made
    Began to turn their back on me, it was a price I gladly paid

    For many years I lived my life, no one visited me
    Till that fateful day, July 2005, when the elders came to see
    How I now felt about the truth, as I'd been so long away
    And if I ever wished to return, I could that very day
    But the watchtower yoke was broken, and I never would again
    Return to the lies and falsehoods that had once caused me such pain
    So I made my decision to bring things to an end
    I would finally quit the watchtower, a letter I would send

    My letter was soon acknowledged, and an announcement made
    I was no longer a Jehovah's Witness, all my dues were paid
    Now all the brothers shunned me, but to me that was no cost
    For I had gained a much greater prize than anything I'd lost
    All the watchtower teachings had been laid bare as lies
    They had fooled me with them once, they would never do it twice
    I know I won't live forever, but I really don't give a damn
    For I have survived Jehovah's Witnesses, what a lucky man I am!

    The End

    Well that's my story. I hope you all get as much pleasure from reading it as I did from writing it. Once again, thankyou for reading

    dedpoet

  • PEC
    PEC

    I enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.

    Philip

  • SacrificialLoon
    SacrificialLoon

    That was a good read, thanks for sharing.

  • Sad emo
    Sad emo

    That is really powerful testimony Trev, so detailed that the reader can almost enter into the experience and relive it alongside you (Well I know what I'm trying to say - dunno if anyone else does lol!).

    Thankyou again for sharing.

  • penny2
    penny2
    Well that's my story.

    No no no no! That's not the whole story. We want to hear what happens next. (Hint: fullofdoubtnow)

    (I love poems)

    penny2

  • dedpoet
    dedpoet

    Penny:

    No no no no! That's not the whole story. We want to hear what happens next. (Hint: fullofdoubtnow)

    I was thinking of adding that part to it, I'll work on it later

    Watch this space

    Trev

  • mia_b
    mia_b

    thanks for your story - must have been hard to write i cant rhyme anything! gratz on getting to jedi!

  • SPAZnik
    SPAZnik

    Hey dedpoet, nicely done!
    Congrats on your 1000th post!

    SPAZnik

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    RAF

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