by Abandoned 18 Replies latest social entertainment
I Believe In You
There’s no such thing as writer’s block.
Muses don’t exist.
Water boils when you watch the clock.
Nothing lost is missed.
It’s better not to love or lose.
Time’s not medicine.
Saxophones don’t cure the blues.
Beauty’s not just skin.
I don’t believe in any myth.
Legends are not true.
But if you want to know my pith,
I believe in you.
Nice job AB.
Juni
NICE
i like it.
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Telling it like it is!
brilliant!
Beautiful poem, Ab.
Nice poem Abandoned
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Thanks everyone. I'm quite happy with how this one came out.
That's good! Could you get the poems published, or could they be sold to BMI or ASCAP for lyrics? Just thinking you could use the $$$!
Capital work. At first I thought you might need to add a syllable to keep the cadence intact, but I think if you read it with a brief pause after "I" in the last line, then the rhythm is preserved.
It's creative; I like it.
