ANNOUNCEMENT: My website is now up!

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We are on the same team. Keep it up
Watchtower Comments Video: www.youtube.com/wtcomments
inkling

Very cool.
Hey, do you accept guest critics?
Slso, is it just me, or are the comments a bit hard to read?
I'm not sure they need to be small, bold, italic, AND highlighted.
Maybe one or two of those things?
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kifoy

Thank you. This is great!

One comment. You've only covered the first chapter yet, but I hope you will be asking more questions.
Especially for the readers that are still under some kind of mind control, questions can be powerful. You have to start to think for yourself.
And you can say just as much with a question as with a conclusion.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
rekless

This is my blogspot if you want to link to it, I'll link to yours
http://thedreampushers.blogspot.com/2008/01/potters-mold.html
rekless
betweenworlds

Bookmarked it as well! keep up the great work.

Betweenworlds
Kenneson

You have my attention. Waiting for the next chapter.