He Killed Our Father

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  • compound complex
    compound complex

    My brother Vince has always been a bit on the hysterical side. Good-hearted, caring, but prone to fly off the handle and break out in a bad case of nerves at the smallest provocation. He is the older of us two boys and was, without a doubt, Daddy's boy. That's why it's so hard to believe that Vince killed our father ...

    Let me makes something clear at the very outset. Vince believes he murdered dear old Dad because he left the sick room for some reason he later refused to explain when questioned, or, shall I emphatically state, casually asked by some well-meaning but stupid, meddling aunt. Who really cares why he walked out of the room at the moment Dad decided to die? Have a smoke, take a leak, scream into the sky ... I couldn't have handled being a care giver. I would have found an excuse to break out of that depressing and smelly bedroom that our father made his final home. Every ten minutes I would've. I mean it.

    Vince, the dutiful son, never lost his patience nor his tender touch as he lifted his beloved daddy out of bed, to help him get dressed and put him in his old, battered recliner. Every day. Every day. He said it gave the old boy something, however small, to look forward to. As far as I was concerned, Vince's precious charge had lived a long and, I suppose, useful life. People liked Mr. Wingate - Wingate, that's our family name - and not a few came by to see him and bring him news of the old neighborhood, which, of course, he was really not up to visiting anymore. I imagine the visitors left feeling pretty cheered up as the old man was a giver, like my brother. The apple doesn't fall far from the tree. Except Dad was the calmer and more emotionally balanced of the two. Anyways, Vince thought his father should be presentable for the guests; it was inevitable that they would come.

    One day no one came. Vince's reason for living - his father - was all gussied up and waiting patiently, gazing out the window, hopeful. Vince apparently needed a break. Like I said, however much he loved and cared for his fading patient, he was raw-nerved and needed to go into his room and crash - just a few minutes, nothing more. I know that's where he was when his precious Daddy, the daddy who demanded all his time and attention, finally died. It was peaceful. So beautiful ...

    It was time. The old man who was Vince's center of attention and object of affection had surely lived long enough. Out with the old. At last. After all, my brother needs his rest - his nerves are shot; he has to spend time with the young and the living. He'll recover, I know he will.

    At last ... at last. I have Vince, my beloved brother, all to myself....

  • StAnn
    StAnn

    Very good. Love the last line.

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    Thanks, StAnn.

    Read The Tell-Tale Heart this evening and, immediately afterwards, raced to the computer.

    Gratefully,

    CoCo

  • Quentin
    Quentin

    A word smith....sad, yet pleasent story...

    My father was in a hospital bed. All of the "friends" had jumped ship. When myself, wife and daughter came in he was fighting the nurse who was attempting to give him morphine to ease his pain. "Daddy I'm here", I said. My father settled back in the bed with a look of content. That I'll never forget.

    I stood on one side holding his hand, Kathy next to me, my daughter stood on the other doing the same. He had nicknamed her "Pebbles" from when she was a toddler, because of the way her hair was kept. No words were spoken, within 30min it was over. He died quite, in comfort with family at his side.

    I have nothing but contempt for the jw's who abandoned him at the end. Like a pack of jackles the "sister's" swooped down on his "worldly" sister. Bearing gifts of food, words of comfort, love bombing my wife and daughter, along with the "brother's" that mysteriously appeared. Perhaps they were too ignorant to discerne Kathy's disdane, being caught up in the jw ritual as they were. For me silence, so I smiled, ate their food like a hog roots his slop, hugged my aunt, then, along with Kathy and Stacy, lite up filling the room with smoke, my aunt joined us as well. Sometimes revenge is not a cold plate of food, it is sweet and tasty.

  • goldensky
    goldensky

    Dear compound complex, as usual I enjoyed your story very much. How I envy your mastery of English! I've also just read The Tell-Tale Heart and found it very exciting indeed! By the way, Edgar Allan Poe and you have pretty much the same writing style, in my opinion. Good day to you!

  • Lozhasleft
    Lozhasleft

    Is this true CC ? Liking your style anyway.

    Loz x

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    Good morning, Quentin, goldensky and Lozhasleft.

    I wrote till midnight, went to bed and am up again, as of 3:30 a.m. I wanted to see if anyone had dropped by. Thanks so much for doing so and commenting!

    What you describe Quentin is all too familiar. I'm sorry it had to happen to you and in such a manner typical of so many of the love bombers. It appears in your case that there was a definite element of phoniness and self-servingness there. Of course, you can't know the heart, but the scenario you describe makes the motivation for the sudden attention quite clear.

    I'm glad to hear you and I, goldensky, were literally on the same page! I've had this book on Poe from the library for an entire month and have had the darnest time getting into it. The prose is so dense. When I saw that TTTH was only a few pages, I went for it. The madness of the so-called unreliable narrator becomes very plain as he begins to explain that he is not crazy. By tale's end the reader sees that he's a raving, crazed lunatic. The unnamed brother in He Killed Our Brother is clearly sane - his sanity or insanity would not cross the reader's mind. In the course of the narrative, however, he reveals his emotional detachment from Vince's "father." Then, gradually, contempt.

    How, REALLY, does Mr. Wingate die??????????????

    And insofar as the background of this hastily drawn story is concerned, Lozhasleft, it is based on like family situations among friends and family, even my own personal emotions of love/hate. Vince is shown as overwrought but genuinely caring, Father as a good and respected gentleman, and, finally, the nameless brother as uninvolved in the family because of his perception of being unloved or, at the very most, less loved than his dutiful big brother. Where does this smoldering resentment take him? What, too, of this inordinate love for his older brother whose attention he craves more than that of his now dead father?

    Thanks for responding. Guess I'm writing again after a month of writer's block ...

    CoCo

  • snowbird
    snowbird

    Well done, CoCo.

    I was the main caregiver to my mother during her waning years.

    It was a cheerless, difficult, thankless task as she would fight and whine and sometimes deliberately soil herself out of sheer spite.

    I wouldn't wish that on anyone else!

    Your narrative all too well captures the dynamics and undercurrents of a family trying to cope during a loved/hated one's twilight years.

    Thanks.

    Syl

  • goldensky
    goldensky

    Sorry I didn't express myself very well on my other post: it's not that I was by chance reading the same book as you, dear CoCo, but I googled the title after you mentioned it and I read it on Internet.

    On second thought, I prefer your writing style to that of Allan Poe, quite honestly. So, when are you writing the sequel to this story?

    Do you know what? Whenever I read your posts, some questions inevitably pop in my mind: How old is this gentleman? How many years was he a Witness for and what led him out of the organization? What did he do for a living? What's his current life like? Does he live alone? How does such a profound, sensitive and talented man spend his days? I certainly wish I could spend some hours with you from time to time to just listen to your no doubt enlightening thoughts and experiences. Oh well, at least we have Internet, don't we?

    Sweet dreams, dear CoCo...

    Snowbird, the more I learn about you, the more I like you...

  • snowbird
    snowbird
    Snowbird, the more I learn about you, the more I like you...

    Same here, GoldenSky. Isn't it amazing how we can "read" each other across time and space?

    On the subject of CoCo: We've never met, but have exchanged quite a few e-mails. He is a rare and precious find in today's sometimes rude and ruthless world. He inspires in me a biblical zeal to pursue goodness.

    To know him is to love him.

    Syl

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