by Dogpatch 26 Replies latest jw friends
On the page that says "Dear Watchtower Society", the last line says,
"Best Luck to you all in your endeavors,"
Has the word 'of' been left out between Best and Luck?
Also, is this line trying to be overly polite? I don't think I could sign a document that wishes the Society the best of luck in all their endeavors. That would include their awful policies on child molesting, disfellowshipping, and treatment of ex-members. There must be a better 'polite way' of ending that.
I could sign it. You know how they feel about luck! And I think that both wordings are proper.
I attribute my escape from the watchtower in large part to the efforts of this group that has higlighted the problems with the "blood issue."
So, god speed...
If you save it as a PDF and upload it to google docs, we can print them more easily. My printer auto duplexes, for example. Plus, you can make updates without changing the URL. This is very helpful if you want to assign a tinyurl and add it to the brochure itself for others to access and print. I update mine when I find mistakes or just want to make adjustments and/or additions. For example:
I also would not wish the watchtower society The Best of Luck or any other such phrase.
I love the brochure, and all of what this stands for. Wonderful.
Sisterly love, SOG
Hi, Folks -- This looks good.
Something else you may be able to use is this thread from about 8 years ago on the blood issue. It's written to be used with the members still in, and it's using their own arguments.
http://www.jehovahs-witness.net/jw/friends/41260/1/The-Blood-Issue
I like having more than one arrow for my bow.
Thanks!
The cover reads "Associated Jehovah's Witnesses for Blood" - sounds a bit ghoulish.
I think you need to insert a "Reform on" in there.
The second page (?), the one with Zen's photo, is titled...
"Associated Jehovah's Witnesses for the Reform on Blood"
'the Reform'? The word 'the' is out of place and should be removed.
Sorry to nit-pick, but we all know how a critical audience (i.e. JW's) will pounce on minor issues of grammar
"...And this information is new to you, you might want to sit down..."
A subordinating conjunction like, "If" would help here: "And if this information is new...."
