Have you written any poetry? Want to share it?

by Lozhasleft 25 Replies latest jw friends

  • truman
    truman

    Faith

    Don’t tell me I need faith.

    The faith you preach

    Forces all my uncertainties

    Into a dark basement corner

    Blocking the door

    With assured expectations guaranteed

    In stacks of yellowing Watchtowers

    Your faith stings

    Like the delayed fizzle of a love-bomb

    That popped and crackled

    With welcoming eyes and

    Glad-you’re-here pats on the back

    But when the fuse was spent,

    I felt only the dry shrapnel

    Of the same refrain repeated

    Five times a week for twenty-seven years:

    Do more, do more, do more.

    I lived with the hooks of fear

    That Paradise might forsake me if I failed

    To ring doorbells and distribute magazines,

    Or if some doubt should slither in my mind

    Searching for purchase in sterilized soil.

    Your faith smells of the sickly sweet rot

    Of a mother who tells her son

    She’d have preferred his adultery

    Because she can’t forgive his questions—

    Of a daughter who holds unseen baby smiles

    Hostage to a grandmother’s conformity.

    Your faith tastes of a life spent

    Trying to satisfy a hobbled mind

    With stale hoagies and flat soda pop—

    Like the sour red Kool-Aid I drank

    To flood a tongue parched with ‘No’

    To a doctor’s plea for blood

    In the collapsing veins of a dying child.

    I can’t return to a faith

    That lives on dutiful ‘amens’

    To all the prayers I never wanted to say,

    Pleas for cleansing the earth

    At the hands of a God whose only miracle

    Is turning the sea of humanity

    Into a river of death,

    Horse-head deep in gore—

    A fitting foundation for a Paradise

    Whose entry fee is unquestioning obedience.

  • Lozhasleft
    Lozhasleft

    Wow...thank you everyone...some really creative people on this forum!

    Loz x

  • belbab
    belbab

    When I was young and single, slugging it out fulltime in hot summers and freezing winters for the glory of Jah. I wrote some poetry for some of the gals. but most of them looked at me kind a wierd like. Jehovah's grunts don't do poetry. So I shut the muddafugger down. I have forgotten most of them and I never kept copies of them. Except one person who cared and still does, kept one or two.

    Here is one of them:

    Take me where the music is

    The laughter and the singing

    Lead me to the warmth, the light

    The sound of laughter ringing.

    Too long has ruled the silent gloom

    Too long the darkness mouldy

    Too long has frozen winter gripped

    And icy winds blown coldly

    As the moth seeks candle flame

    The bee the taste of honey

    Take me where the music is

    To light and laughter sunny

    Where you are, the music is

    With you is heard the singing

    With you, the color, the sound the light

    Where joy of heart is springing

    The taste of honey for the bee

    For me the candle flaming

    When frail wings of hope are burnt

    I crawl away heart paining

    I....crawl.....away.....heart paining.

    belbab

  • mouthy
    mouthy

    I think that is beautful Belbab

  • belbab
    belbab

    Tanks sweet Mouthy,

    Your poem, too was a pleasant surprise.

    Belbab

  • Lozhasleft
    Lozhasleft

    Loving the creativity here. It seems many have expressed their feelings about the WTBS in their poetry.

    Loz x

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