Renga

by LittleToe 70 Replies latest social entertainment

  • LittleToe
    LittleToe

    http://thewordshop.tripod.com/renga.htm

    As the Winter sun
    casts long shadows on the road
    the people go home

  • Xander
    Xander

    Hmmmm...where to go from there....let's see, lots of angles, how about...

    more unfruitful harvesting
    as homes are empty till late

    A fanatic is one who, upon losing sight of his goals, redoubles his efforts.
    --George Santayana
  • GentlyFeral
    GentlyFeral

    yellow light snaps on
    suddenly. vivid lives resume.
    "are they gone yet?"

  • Xander
    Xander

    voices in my head dancing
    not to me, they're not gone yet

    trying to keep it dynamic here...hehe...

    A fanatic is one who, upon losing sight of his goals, redoubles his efforts.
    --George Santayana
  • Xena
    Xena

    dancing lights the fire
    passionate smiles fan the flames
    forever is now

  • plmkrzy
    plmkrzy

    and never was nor ever again
    spend cold dark nights
    loosing my religion

    thats the best I could do ppls.

  • LittleToe
    LittleToe

    flames rose higher and higher
    consuming the gnarled log

  • plmkrzy
    plmkrzy

    scattering through night sky's
    on sweet cool breath
    echoes carry

  • LittleToe
    LittleToe

    Sound ripples across the skies
    aloft on the crisp starscape

    LOL - that was nowhere near 5-7-5 syllabuls, plmkrzy, it was 6-4-4.
    Nice though!

  • Xander
    Xander

    no stars could be seen at night
    standing on the charred landscape

    A fanatic is one who, upon losing sight of his goals, redoubles his efforts.
    --George Santayana

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