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As the Winter sun
casts long shadows on the road
the people go home
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http://thewordshop.tripod.com/renga.htm
As the Winter sun
casts long shadows on the road
the people go home
Hmmmm...where to go from there....let's see, lots of angles, how about...
more unfruitful harvesting
as homes are empty till late
A fanatic is one who, upon losing sight of his goals, redoubles his efforts.
--George Santayana
yellow light snaps on
suddenly. vivid lives resume.
"are they gone yet?"
voices in my head dancing
not to me, they're not gone yet
trying to keep it dynamic here...hehe...
A fanatic is one who, upon losing sight of his goals, redoubles his efforts.
--George Santayana
dancing lights the fire
passionate smiles fan the flames
forever is now
and never was nor ever again
spend cold dark nights
loosing my religion
thats the best I could do ppls.
flames rose higher and higher
consuming the gnarled log
scattering through night sky's
on sweet cool breath
echoes carry
Sound ripples across the skies
aloft on the crisp starscape
LOL - that was nowhere near 5-7-5 syllabuls, plmkrzy, it was 6-4-4.
Nice though!
no stars could be seen at night
standing on the charred landscape
A fanatic is one who, upon losing sight of his goals, redoubles his efforts.
--George Santayana