Do-Not-Call Flyer Text: Your comments please.

by expatbrit 11 Replies latest jw friends

  • expatbrit
    expatbrit

    I jotted down a draft for a flyer aimed at the general public who know next-to-nothing about the JW's. I've tried to be calm and rational in the feel of the text, to avoid giving the impression of having an axe to grind.

    I think having suggested pro-forma letters on the back of the flyer would be good, perhaps with the addresses of the local congregation and branch office already filled in.

    The flyer would need to be tweaked for different countries where, for instance, not-at-home slips are no longer used.

    So, please let me know what you think. Be brutal!

    Oh, and if anyone can think of a snappy title, please do.

    Expatbrit.

    You have probably been called upon by Jehovah's Witnesses many times. On the surface, these visits are nothing more than a frequent annoyance. However, there are reasons for you to be concerned, especially if you are parents of young children.

    This flyer has been prepared by a group of current and former Jehovah's Witnesses who are deeply concerned about certain practices and policies of the Watchtower Bible and Tract Society (the official organisation of Jehovah's Witnesses). We urge you to spend a couple of minutes considering it's contents.

    The Records Jehovah's Witnesses Keep On You

    Jehovah's Witnesses conduct a highly organised proselytising campaign. This involves keeping detailed maps and records of their "territory". There are special forms in use for this purpose ("S8's"). On these forms Jehovah's Witnesses will record when you are or are not at home during one of their proselytising sessions. Because they work through their territories frequently, it is easily possible to build up a fairly detailed knowledge of regular times that you are not at home. This presents an obvious security risk, since these records are freely available to any person associating with Jehovah's Witnesses and engaging in their proselytising work. There are no background checks performed before a person is allowed to participate.

    If the Witnesses manage to find a person at home and talk to them, the information recorded is even more extensive. Details recorded will include the name, sex, and approximate age of the person, the date and time of the call, what was discussed, and any other observations of the person or property made at the time.

    Many people will find this intrusive and objectionable. However, even if you do not mind these records being kept on you, there is another important reason for you to be concerned.

    Jehovah's Witnesses And The Problem Of Paedophiles

    Over the past ten years, many religions have had to face the problem of dealing with child-abusers within their ranks. You have probably read reports of court cases in your newspaper.

    Jehovah's Witnesses are not immune from this problem, and during the past year increasing evidence has accumulated of paedophile abuse within congregations of Jehovah's Witnesses (see "Further Information", below). Unfortunately, the internal policies of the Watchtower Society (such as requiring the testimony of two witnesses before disciplinary action is taken), together with the attitude common to most high-control groups of keeping negative aspects hidden from the general public, means that victims of abuse often suffer
    intense pressure to remain silent. Watchtower policy is to automatically report abuse to secular authorities only if specifically required by the laws of the state in which it occurs. Most relevantly to you, suspected and known paedophiles are NOT prevented from engaging in the proselytising work. In fact, continuance in this activity is encouraged.

    When you consider the records kept that may be available to a known or suspected paedophile, including addresses where children are known to live and the times when people are or are not at home, you will no doubt begin to realise why many current and former Jehovah's Witnesses are deeply concerned over this issue. That the problem is significant is indicated by the fact that NBC's Dateline program, after conducting extensive investigations, will soon be airing an expose' of this issue.

    What Can You Do?

    Simply put, if Jehovah's Witnesses do not call upon you, there will be no records kept and very little risk.

    It should be stated here that freedom of speech and religion are not the issues. We are concerned with your right to privacy and to protect your children from individuals who could abuse them.

    It is not generally known that if you make a specific request, Jehovah's Witnesses will not call upon you. Thus, the simplest
    thing you can do is to make an emphatic request to be put upon the Witnesses' "do not call" list.

    There are different ways of accomplishing this. One is to make a verbal request next time they call. However, it is quite possible that the individual you make the request of will either forget or simply refuse to honour your request, and you will have no evidence that a request was made. Therefore it will be far more effective if you make the request in writing and send it by registered mail to the local congregation of Jehovah's Witnesses, the Branch Office of the Watchtower Society in your country, and your lawyer or solicitor, should you have one.

    It is of interest that in a court case in Pennsylvania, USA, a woman successfully sued the Jehovah's Witnesses and was awarded $632 because they called on her after she had made a specific request for them not to do so ( http://www.do-not-call.org/webs/trespass.htm).

    We would urge you to consider spending a few minutes doing this. It will not only prevent further records being kept on you, but will also reduce risk to your family.

    Further Information

    Silent Lambs (www.silentlambs.org) is a not-for-profit organisation run by a former Jehovah's Witness elder (pastor), who resigned his position in protest at the Watchtower Society's policies on child-abuse. The website contains in-depth information on the issue, press coverage, and victim's testimonials. You may find some of the material disturbing.

  • Candle
    Candle

    SOME PENNY-PINCHER ADVERTS FROM HTTP://WWW.SILENTLAMBS.ORG

    The following are ads to place in your local paper to help get the word out regarding molestation issues within the Watchtower Organization. We ask that you do not add any further information other than what is listed here as we wish the message to be uniform.

    Any suggestions can be sent to info@silentlambs and will be considered.

    1.

    ARE PEDOPHILES KNOCKING ON YOUR DOOR?

    For further information see: www.silentlambs.org

    Or call 1-877-WTABUSE

    2.

    ARE YOU IN A PEDOPHILE PARADISE?

    For further information see: www.silentlambs.org

    Or call 1-877-WTABUSE

    3.

    THE VICTIMS SPEAK

    For further information see: www.silentlambs.org

    Or call 1-877-WTABUSE

    4.

    IF AS A JEHOVAH’S WITNESS, A MEMBER OF YOUR FAMILY HAS BEEN MOLESTED INFORMATION IS AVAILABLE

    For further information see: www.silentlambs.org

    Or call 1-877-WTABUSE

    5.

    HELP FOR JEHOVAH’S WITNESS CHILDREN WHO HAVE BEEN MOLESTED

    For further information see: www.silentlambs.org

    Or call 1-877-WTABUSE

    6.

    ARE YOU A SILENTLAMB?

    For further information see: www.silentlambs.org

    Or call 1-877-WTABUSE

    7.

    THE LAMBS ARE ROARING

    For further information see: www.silentlambs.org

    Or call 1-877-WTABUSE

  • Fredhall
    Fredhall

    Hey Pink Panther,

    Now you can copy what you wrote down and go to door to door with it.

  • Simon
    Simon

    I think that is excellent expatbrit - it really doesn't come across as being from a "bitter-ex" which I think is important and where so many attempts like this fall down. Also, it is giving them information that is important to them and is designed to help them, with their best interest at heart. Glad you avoided any doctrine too 'cause most people don't give a hoot really!

    Are you going to do a formatted version (perhaps people could help with this) or keeping it simple plain text?

  • Scully
    Scully

    Expatbrit:

    I think the text itself is excellent. I'd run it through the spell-checker to correct the it's/its, etc, to spruce up the credibility and professionalism, but otherwise it's fine.

    Do we know when exactly the Dateline episode is going to air?? Maybe it would be better to refer the reader to an issue that's currently in the news (the case that's going on in the US for instance) rather than a program that is anticipated, coming soon, etc. It may turn the public off the same way the 'coming soon' predictions of Armageddon from the JWs do.... just a thought.

    I think it would also be great to include a window sticker that looks something like this:

    Love, Scully


  • RunningMan
    RunningMan

    I like it.

    You may want to look at some of the wordings. In a couple places, they seem overly formal and could use a little simplification. For example:

    "are or are not at home" is mentioned twice. I would simplify it to either one or the other.

    "individual you make your request of" should be reworded to get "of" away from the endn of the phrase.

    Overall, it comes accross as very reasonable and convincing. Many of these things are too strident and may actually backfire - this one looks good.

    I would suggest a little market research, though. Run it by a test audience to see if outsiders understand it and are moved by it.

    Is it really necessary to send a registered letter? The cost and hassle might turn some people off. Why not make the bottom of the letter a tear-off that can be sent or phoned into the local hall.

  • nicolaou
    nicolaou

    Thanks for the time and effort you've put into this Expat', I look forward to hosting it as soon as you're ready.

    Contributions and suggestions for the Do-Not-Call site are always welcome!

    Nic'

    http://www.do-not-call.org

  • Simon
    Simon

    just thought of somthing else ...

    In this bit:

    If the Witnesses manage to find a person at home and talk to them, the information recorded is even more extensive. Details recorded will include the name, sex, and approximate age of the person, the date and time of the call, what was discussed, and any other observations of the person or property made at the time.
    Would it be worth adding somewhere the thought of "opinions expressed" as that normally is a fear of civil liberty types - that individual opinions (could be critical of government etc...) are 'tracked'.
  • expatbrit
    expatbrit

    Thanks for the feedback!

    Simon: As far as formatting and graphics etc go, I have no training or expertise. I don't think too much in the way of graphics is needed, just some eye-catching and pleasing headings etc. Formatting it is the next step I guess. I'll incorporate the phrase about opinions too.

    Scully: LOL! Spelchek! Why didn't I think of that! Good point about referencing a current case, as it would be more "immediate". On the other hand, not many people are familiar with current cases, and a name like NBC Dateline carries a lot of weight. Perhaps a bit of both would be good. Love the sticker! Is the design your own?

    Runningman: I'll amend the bits you commented on, rightly, as being cumbersome. Unfortunately the formal style is the passive voice which tends to give extra verbage, so cuts are beneficial. Once it's amended a bit more then I can show it to outsiders.

    Nic: Cool! Thanks. Got any formatting ideas? lol.

    And I still can't think of a title. I could never think of themes for my ministry school talks either. Every damn talk I gave was entitled "The Bible's hope for the future."

    Expatbrit

  • JT
    JT

    excellent text, but you may want to shorten it- most folks don't like to read alot of material

    the shorter the better and to the point

    james

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