Asleep in a Wood

by compound complex 25 Replies latest watchtower bible

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    So weary I was from a walk in the woods

    that I lay to rest at the foot of an alder tree,

    finding sweet repose on a cool nest of leaves.

    The air, both fragrant and warm, lulled me gently

    to a needed sleep (I welcomed it gladly) and said to

    me that she would awaken me in a very short while.

    To that blissful state of a flowing mind I succumbed and

    awaited her promise that, in due course, the time should

    come when I would arise refreshed, prepared to carry on.

    Dreaming away that the air had turned chill,

    I awoke with a start, black hail on my face and

    my clothes all awash with an unheralded drench.

    The sky had turned dark (for hours had I slept), but

    for moon blurred by mist and stars draped by a shroud

    that presaged to this man some great terror lay nearby.

    In slow counter-motion, as viewed in deep southern climes,

    the black water's center spun and swirled till, at length, once

    placid liquid caved with deafening roar to an abyss near to Hell.

    Threw myself backward to a boulder lichened a

    verdigris hue, praying its stolid stance would at

    one with me become, stopping a downward slip.

    Trembling, useless hands grabbed behind me in a

    futile effort to latch onto the permanence of stone

    to earth held fast through eons of erosive assaults.

    Soon did it seem that the Devil's own maelstrom had

    no desire for my wretched soul: this man's descent to

    the land below stopped short as the sky funneled down.

    Topsy-turvy had my world become, a microcosm

    compared to this shifting of heaven to earth, earth

    to heaven that paraded past an irrelevant man who

    Just happened to be on the scene when a cosmic sweep

    of heaven's own luminaries was wrought, channeling the

    celestial vault downward, downward into a lake unlike any

    Other on the vast but limited expanse of an orb chosen, I would

    guess, to serve as receptacle of an unfolding new world of bright

    and glory: misty moon shines forth, enshrouded stars glow anew.

  • ziddina
    ziddina

    marking to enjoy later!!

  • a watcher
    a watcher

    Reminds me of "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening" by Robert Frost. I especially like the last stanza:

    The woods are lovely, dark and deep,

    But I have promises to keep,

    And miles to go before I sleep,

    And miles to go before I sleep.

    Reminds me also of Ezekiel 34:25, one my favorite scriptures:

    ...and they will actually dwell in the wilderness in security and sleep in the forests.

  • BabaYaga
    BabaYaga

    Darkly beautiful, Dear CoCo!

    Is there a new world dawning...?

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    Thank you, dear Ziddy, a watcher and Baba, for your welcome comments!

    I awoke and turned on the computer, wondering and hoping that my latest - an example of weird fiction - might have a few reads. I had not anticipated actual comments!

    Welcome to the forum, a watcher. I appreciate those beautiful lines from both Frost and Zeke.

    I was inspired by Clark Ashton Smith's prose poetry The Black Lake, where stars reflect - strangely so - in a dark and mysterious lake. I do hope that there might be a new world dawning, Baba!

    Love,

    CoCo

  • panhandlegirl
    panhandlegirl

    CoCo, your writing is intriguing. I like the way you ascribe personification to the air. I love to watch the moon and it's different phases so I enjoyed your use of the moon and stars.

    I can picture myself experiencing what you are writing.

    PHG

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    Thank you, dear panhandlegirl, for your lovely post.

    I'm glad you liked my mental wanderings through a fantasy landscape. To tell the truth,I've never actually been to the spot described ( ): it just came out of my head and went,
    so to speak, to paper! Thanks and credit to Clark Ashton Smith for the setting.

    IMAGINATION!

    Have a good day.

    Love,

    CoCo Awake

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    In magick, the Alder is well known for having divinatory properties,
    and therefore this month is characterized by prophecy and getting in
    touch with one's own intuition. If you are musically inclined, consider
    carving a flute out of an Alder shoot, and using it to call spirits of Air.
    Similarly, the tree has connection to the Fey, and charms made of
    Alder can be used to contact them.

    hummingbirdspaganplace.blogspot.com

    So weary I was from a walk in the woods

    that I lay to rest at the foot of an alder tree,

    finding sweet repose on a cool nest of leaves.

    The air, both fragrant and warm, lulled me gently

    to a needed sleep (I welcomed it gladly) and said to

    me that she would awaken me in a very short while.

    To that blissful state of a flowing mind I succumbed and

    awaited her promise that, in due course, the time should

    come when I would arise refreshed, prepared to carry on.

  • compound complex
  • nancy drew
    nancy drew

    It was over and as he looked up at the moon and stars he felt the quiet of the night and smelled the crispness in the air. The walk home was uneventful till he reached the bend in the road and as he looked towards his house a shadowy figure awaited him. It stopped him in his tracks and the hair on is arms rose up and a shiver went down his spine.

    to be continued....

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