Brother Wanis is a real person. He's an absolute Nazi elder who gave me some real grief. He's like if you got the worst trait of every elder ever and rolled them into one person.
Jehovah's Witness Tragedy - a series of installments.
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LoisLane looking for Superman
------>>> Tell me what is next??? ??? ???
Are you going to write he received no acknowledgement from the Sydney Branch and later that (this?) year he saw an Elder's wife wearing it???LL... who likes (loves) to read mystery's.
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Julia Orwell
I can't reveal the story! I can tell you Adam has the perfect thing to cheer him up though!
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talesin
I used to edit people's work for a living, and lately, doing some free stuff for friends who are writing, as you. Some memoirs, some fiction. I'm so enjoying this story.
Time for me to say good nite, and am looking forward to the next section. Ah, the ring, and no acknowledgment of receipt. Hmmm.
Congratulations on the new job! and I would say, a great future as a writer.
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LoisLane looking for Superman
lol ... Are you saying there is a real Brother W- anis ... Wa - nis ... Wan-is... or Wa - ni -s??? Still very funny last name. lol
LL
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talesin
I can tell you Adam has the perfect thing to cheer him up though!
Cheeky! Teasing us like that! :P
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LoisLane looking for Superman
Good Night Talesin.
Good Afternoon Julia.
Night, night for me and I hope no more JW nightmares this week for me either.
Julia, happy to hear of your new job. Yay Julia!
What a great way to pay bills. With a job you love!
Night.
LL
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KateWild
Julia,
I loved reading it. I like that it's fast paced and not much details, it's easy reading and fun. Some novels with lots of details are boring and I tend to lose track of the point of the story. I could relate to it. I think it's good for the JW and exJW community, but I wouldn't know how you would market something like that and make a profit
Looking forward to the next bit
Kate xx
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Muddy Waters
Great stuff, Julia! Fast paced, totally relatable to the ex-JW. Looking forward to more!
There is such a sad, creepy undertone to the story, the lack of feeling in the JW characters-- that mindless devotion to the org--
your writing style and story is reminiscent of John Steinnbeck, nice work. :)
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