Oh, god, Big Tex.
I am speechless
Exile
by Big Tex 24 Replies latest watchtower child-abuse
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Billygoat
((((((((((((Chris))))))))))))))))
I know you've heard this before. I'll add my voice.
You need to be published. You have a gift - please share it with more than just us.
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kgfreeperson
Wow. Just wow.
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Big Tex
I am speechless
Me too.
Gee, I'm glad everyone liked it. I've written stories in my head for years and never shared with anyone, mainly because I thought no one would care. Maybe I should start putting more of them down on paper.
Thunder, thanks for the consctructive criticism. It helps. I really listen to constructive criticism, because I want to improve. I want to do better than this.
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teejay
Beautiful.
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MegaDude
Vivid imagery. Strong emotion. Good piece of writing. Perhaps you could send that in to somebody like "Reader's Digest" to be published?
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teejay
... I want to improve. I want to do better than this.
Now isn't that a scary thought?
tj ~ hoping Big Tex remembers his ol' buddy teejay when it comes time to hire an agent...
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outnfree
Moved to tears, Big Tex.
Stunningly powerful!
Do write more, do get an agent, do share your talent with a wider audience. Please?
outnfree
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SheilaM
BigTex: I disagree with Thunder this is a wonderful short narrative. You can develop it into a short story possbily but it works. In writing they say it is a "full movement" this means that you have a beginning, middle and an ending.