by SYN 25 Replies latest jw friends
SYN,
Now that I have checked my heart, and it is ticking again,I will say that has to be the best thing I have ever read here....What A flippen story you have written.....How long did that take to come up with? You have some very good qualities on how to write a book....Ever thought of it?..You had me totally frozen to my screen...like a good book that I did not want to put down.....I will keep a eye out in the future for your posts.....Wow what a story!
Morty
That was REALLY Good. I couldn't stop reading. It sounded really belivable.Thanks for sharing.
Thanks, guys. I really love your comments! It's nice to get a bit of feedback!
If you guys liked this, maybe you'll like another story I wrote yesterday, "The Segmentation Fault of the Soul": http://www.jehovahs-witness.com/6/62250/1.ashx
Mortons, I did that in about an hour or so, with a break to stuff myself with a small chicken mayonnaise sandwich in between. And SegFault of the Soul I did last night, before I went to bed, spell-checked and everything! Yesterday was just a very, very good day for writing...the muse was flowing like a mofo!
Wow Syn...
Very powerful stuff indeed. Please share more. I really think you have awesome potential.
Thanks Spicey. How've you been lately? Haven't seen you mucharound these parts...
Oh ya know...the usual sort of things ya do when ya gots a man to keep ya busy ;)
nice ta see you too ((SYN))
Wow that was a good read SYN........I hardly ever bother to read anything longer than a few sentenaces but this story kept me reading to the end.
I was formulating a so long SYN you killing bastard post for my reply. I'm going to read the other story you put a link to.........thanks!
Kate
Jeepers!! You had me fooled up to the part where the greengrocer was stabbed. Thanks for the story, Syn.
Oh dear. Everyone suddenly seems to think that I'm a brain-damaged dude with an affinity for knives and little red pills! But thanks for the positive comments!
But don't you know that all fiction is subconsciously autobiographical, SYN?
