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  • LittleToe
    LittleToe

    The Emptiness

    I lay awake in the womb of the night
    Darkness, deep, surrounds.
    An interplay of dancing lights,
    Companions there, beside me.

    A silent breeze, it's soft caress,
    Wanders o'er my naked chest
    Causing ripples of delight
    Before it leaves me quite bereft.

    It's mother suckles to a tree,
    I hear it's joy through window,
    And then a distant gull alights
    Carried far aside.

    The raindrops fall, remind of Spring,
    Spilling excess on the ground,
    And as the hungry maw of lawn
    Opens wide the load is borne.

    The distant rumble on the shore,
    Auld sea, snoring constant.
    And as the house creaks to a halt
    I wish for life to fill it.

    LT - 9th August 2004

  • Robdar
    Robdar

    Lovely poem. Very lovely.

    Robyn

  • bisous
    bisous

    thanks LT, great imagery....I felt your loneliness. Maybe that's presumptuous. I felt loneliness expressed in the poem...

    nice work

  • Xena
    Xena

    beautiful poem LT

    I must admit I do envy that errant breeze

  • LittleToe
    LittleToe

    What can I say?
    I live on an island full of (ok, ok, Gumby, you can visit!), t was 3am, balmy, and I couldn't sleep...

  • bisous
    bisous
    t was 3am, balmy, and I couldn't sleep...

    Balmpot ... *steals a page from the Celtic*

  • reboot
    reboot

    (((LT)))) I keep re-reading the last verse...dont stop.

    May I ? you know i'm feeling facitious lately so .....

    The Explaination..

    You said the reason you did'nt think,

    was due to the amount of drink

    that passed you lips.......

    (shooting straight to your hips..)

    thought coitally,

    apparently;

    she was nothing much

    compared to me.

    reboot.2004

  • LittleToe
    LittleToe

    A single dram, an hour before,
    Could hardly make my senses soar.
    So though you think the reason clear,
    When next we meet, you'll live in fear...

  • reboot
    reboot

    A playful smile envelopes my mouth

    as I fixidly watch you eating.

    I imagine your muscles enlarging to match

    the desire in me that's increasing.

    reboot 2004

  • LittleToe
    LittleToe

    Distracted, I put down the bun,
    Who'd a thought it be such fun.
    Reflected smiles across the thread
    Belay the spoken word thus shed.

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