Finding JWD

by talesin 28 Replies latest jw friends

  • talesin
    talesin

    I wrote this poem in the wee hours this morning after reading prophecor`s thread (You`re My Reason Why I Am).

    Anyway, it`s for all of you, and for those who work really hard to keep this place up and running.

    You Belong

    - Finding JWD

    She was alone so very long.
    She had to make it on her own.
    A voice inside her whispered ...
    Be strong.

    She suffered greatly but endured.
    She sought her tribe; where she belonged.
    Longing of her heart's desire ...
    Be strong.

    She felt she never would succeed.
    She hid her tears, and persevered.
    Would she ever find her peace ...
    Be strong.

    She visited a friendly pub.
    She looked around, she fit right in.
    And heard the heartfelt greeting ...
    You belong.

    t

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  • JAVA
    JAVA

    Well done! This forum, and the Internet are a God-send for ex members of cults. Your poem says it well.

  • Country_Woman
    Country_Woman

    That shoe fits more feets.....

    thanks

  • Country_Woman
    Country_Woman

    accidentily post twice.

  • prophecor
    prophecor

    The following is a brief description as to the loss and disillusionment that once was my life before finding JWD. Longing for the day when my search for spirituality and religion wouldn't hold me hostage to a hostilic belief system as is placed upon us via the WTBTS. In the end, being able to find freedom from an oppresive religious institution. Thanx 4 Hearing Me Out. Arthur So delicate the balance 'tween misery & majesty

    Genious & Insanity

    So fine the line so frail the cord

    As would be any two edged sword

    My best defense was innocence

    When once was I so cavalier

    What once was me

    Like liquid

    Free

    When all I'd do was run and play

    Tomorrow just another day

    Never a need to look beyond

    Five minutes more

    Time too

    Ignore

    Forever never need be found

    The moment now

    Suffice somehow

  • Brummie
    Brummie

    Talesin, That is great.

    SO is yours Proph!

    So much talent here...

  • talesin
    talesin

    prophecor, what a beautiful verse ...

    and so true for everyone.

    bttt

    Has anyone else written something they would like to share?

    t

  • purplesofa
    purplesofa

    I got this published in a little poetry quarterly last year.

    *********************************************************************************************************************

    Hope

    Today I cry for all I have not done

    for all I had to do.

    The answers were all there before me.

    Who had time to think?

    But-

    Busy with necessities.

    How relentless it became.

    To stay alive.

    What a different person we become,

    When there is no time for

    laughs, tears, sunsets, butterflys, people, love

    tucked away

    the little girl is still there

    neatly

    safely

    guarded

    waiting for a safe time

    to come out and play.

    She cries too for all she did not

    get to do, and all she had to do.

    See, now I look like a woman,

    but it is deceiving as I am only a

    child

    and Soon I will be an old woman

    Where will the child be then?

    Hopefully enjoying

    laughs, tears, sunsets, butterflys, people, love

    purps

    I think this poem best decribes a life of abuse, control and manipulation

    and my hope for growing old happy!

    You are all invited!!!!!

  • talesin
    talesin

    Purps,

    I think this poem best decribes a life of abuse, control and manipulation

    and my hope for growing old happy! You are all invited!!!!!

    I loved your poem. Yes, the effects of abuse, control and manipulation are universal, aren`t they?

    And you know what, that little girl will be able to experience all the things she missed --- there`s a whole great life ahead. Once we choose to work towards happiness with the blinders OFF, there is no holding us back. :)

    Published --- woo hoo, that is awesome!

    tal

    bttt ---- anyone else?

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