"It's never been easy for me to convey what I think but that was my fault for not writing that sentence right." - looter
Here's a tip looter. Learn to collect and solidify your thoughts before you put them to paper. Then present your ideas in the most succinct manner possible. Your overuse of language only detracts from the ideas you are trying to convey. Strunk's book is a classic and I highly recommend that you read it.