Aztec you really have done an excellent job of researching your data. You obviously put in some time into this and are very passionate about your beliefs, and thats excellent! However you made the same mistake I did some years ago and for the same reasons. If I were your professor grading your essay I would give you a very good mark, but you would still be a few points short of the highest grade possible.
And why would that be? Because you have all kinds of good data but you started with a false premise. Your premise is that Bush/Cheney and the other assorted big-oil cohorts are pushing for war with Iraq for the purpose of financial gain. You in fact said:
The facts show the Bush family and friends stand to profit greatly from war and the controlled flow of Iraqi oil.
For this to be true, oil prices would have to rise considerably and remain there over considerable time as a result of the war. Are you aware what happened to oil prices during the last Iraq war? Are you aware how the Saudis were beside themselves with grief because the benchmark price of crud plummeted and hovered at approximately $10.00 per barrel?
I would suggest that if any of you have oil futures, sell them now because if history is any indicator, when this dictator is removed from power, oil futures are going down.
So in conclusion I will say to you what my professor said to me (Im paraphrasing as he said it much better): I loved your work, your effort and passion are obvious and Im giving you extra credit for that and you will need that extra credit too due to the fact that I will be deducting a few points because your data does not support your premise, you simply are wrong.
wishing you well
Freeman
Edited by - freeman on 18 January 2003 19:22:2