Mulan:
Please allow me to comment on the comments.
1. Where your address is referred to, put your actual address, and work address, if applicable. Also the address of the congregation, when referenced.
I see no reason to include the address of the cong in the "body" of the letter. I included the Cong Address in the letter's "heading", which you did not include in this excerpt.
His suggestion to specifically list your residential address (I assume he refers to the "trespass" paragraph) is not a good one in my opinion, since you might move at a later time. I stayed "generic" for a reason.
His suggestion to specifically list any "applicable" "work address" is flat out wrong, unless of course you are self-employed. You can't forbid someone to enter your employer's property. He misses the purpose of this paragraph, which is to deter the elders from visiting, callng, or emailing. Any attempt to communicate off-premises is detered generally in the opening paragraph.
2. Name all elders in the congregation, at the appropriate place.
While there is nothing wrong with doing so, my general phrase "individual harassers" was, again, intentionally selected, because it covers not only the lders, but also the MSs, as well as their wives, or any other busybodies in the cong.
3. Refer to previous visits by elders, very specifically: dates, names, etc.
Again, I prefer to stay "general", versus "specific", in order to keep them guessing about what's going on in your thoughts.
4. In the paragraph about "if an announcement is made about disassociation or disfellowshipping": Say this: ".........announcement, or written statment is circulated, it will be considered a slanderous statement, a defamation of my character, meant to alienate me from my family, children, and friends.
Again, being "specific" by identifying the legal theory(ies) which my "general" threat of "legal action" encompasses serves no purpose but to allow them to dispute (even if only to themselves) that an announcement constitutes "slander". (IT DOESN'T) Stay GENERAL, and keep them guessing what type of legal theories might apply.
5. Send the letter by registered mail, AND regular mail to any elder.
I included the registered mail recc in my opening comments, which were not included here.
With regard to his comment that "you can sue" if they proceed, sure you can, just don't hope to win!!!