Dear Chickpea:
Thank you so much for taking us, your readers held by rapt attention, on a walk with you and girlz.
I am thoroughly enchanted by your lyrical prose and your quietly humorous juxtaposing of the sentient elements [humans and beasties] against those inanimate [i.e., the keys and coin keeping each other company is choice]. Your description of the locale and how, at the appropriate time, key players entered either stage right or stage left had me spellbound. Why? Because I was with you - in my mind's eye - trudging along. However, I was largely staring vacantly at the clouds and picking an occasional posie at such a time when, perhaps, I might have been watching my path and had spotted that gorgeous bloom.
When again shall we walk?
CoCo