My Latest Poem

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  • Robdar
    Robdar

    Abandoned, I really like your poems. Have you posted poems before and somehow I missed them?

  • purplesofa
    purplesofa

    hey good on the others you posted!!!

    I still want to do that idea I talked to you about awhile back!!!

    Remember it?

    purps

    edited to add~~~ I gotta get out the dictionary ........you use some mighty big words!!!!

  • Abandoned
    Abandoned

    I still want to do that idea I talked to you about awhile back!!!

    Remember it?

    I think so. Are you talking about what we talked about a couple Thursdays ago? These are samples of the poems I'd like to use. What pieces of yours do you think go well with them?

  • purplesofa
    purplesofa
    What pieces of yours do you think go well with them?

    ohhhhhh fun, I will work on it this week and see what meshes. Plus I got some new stuff!!!

    purps

  • Abandoned
    Abandoned
    Abandoned, I really like your poems. Have you posted poems before and somehow I missed them?

    I've posted a number here, but I haven't been hanging around for four months or so. If you want to see more of my poems, check this out.

  • Abandoned
    Abandoned

    ohhhhhh fun, I will work on it this week and see what meshes. Plus I got some new stuff!!!

    purps

    Cool, I would be honored to work with you and your gorgeous artwork.

  • Abandoned
    Abandoned

    Accidental Touches

    A gentle brush here and a subtle grab there.
    You were a bit obvious but I didn’t care.
    Your motives weren’t hidden yet I still didn’t dare.

    The glances said, “Yes.” My courage screamed, “Can’t.”
    Something I’d done, brought about this enchant.
    The tension was soaring – it’s return non-extant.

    How long did they last? A month? Was it more?
    Were they hindering our relations – hurting our rapport?
    I sensed when they stopped, it was for evermore.

    It was with much surprise, therefore that I felt.
    The actual payload that with such skill you dealt.
    The knife was slender, sleek, lithe, and svelte.

    I now sit and wonder how would it have gone,
    Had heeding my intuition I had simply foregone.
    Would I be your lover, your friend, or your pawn?

  • snowbird
    snowbird

    I like your poetry. It is flowing and lyrical but at the same time down to earth. Keepin' it real.

    Sylvia

  • faundy
    faundy

    Achoo! Oh no, I've got the sneezes
    The cough and cold and chest that wheezes
    Keep locked up, away from breezes
    That filter through drafty doors.

  • AWAKE&WATCHING
    AWAKE&WATCHING

    I love them all. I love to write poetry.

    My favorite is probably "Irony's Not Cruel".

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