my blog what you think?
by rekless 10 Replies latest jw friends
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Meeting Junkie No More
First off, I don't know much about blogs, so this is one of my first exposures to same...
Not too much time here at work, but I read through the synopsis and it is BRILLIANT! I am looking forward to reading the rest of it when I get a chance, but I noticed you had zero comments so far, so thought I'd be the first...VERY WELL DONE from what I've perused thus far. "Mesmerized by the matrix of dreams and deceit" - mind if I borrow that? You couldn't have described it better. I was not born in, but 'coerced' more or less since a very young age but it truly is a matrix, one that you unfortunately don't see while you're in it...
Will this eventually be a book? I think it would make a damn good one!
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Rooster
Christmas day arrived and we woke up early, Daddy called on his ham radio from the ship and wished us a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. He told us he missed us and couldn’t wait to get home. Mama cried as she talked and Buck and I started opening gifts. I couldn’t wait to rip the wrapping paper off to get to the Red Ryder BB Guns. We poured the BBs into the magazines of our rifles and ran outside to target practice. It wasn’t long until our friends came over. Each rode their new bikes and carried footballs. We tried out each other’s presents then there came the grand finale, after comparing the balls, we chose the best and started playing "smear the queer."
we could not play with any type of guns growing up nor did we celebrate Christmas. -
rekless
we didn't celebrate Christmas after we became "approved associates." This excerpt was @ the beginning of studying. In '55 every kid had a B B gun in Mississippi
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rekless
Will this eventually be a book? I think it would make a damn good one!
Yes, it is completed and I'm seeking an agent, but in the mean-time I need some feed back.
thanks for reading.
I'm going to upload a chapter a week or so.
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compound complex
Excellent, Rekless ...
I "know" Sister Franklin - she studied with me!
Fascinating story.
CC
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Abandoned
I love the layout and the look -- very classy. My only real suggestion is that your blog on part one of the Potter's Mold is a kind of long. I would break that down into smaller chunks and release it over a period of a week or so. What happens is that you may lose some readers just because they are intimidated with how long it is.
Good job with the info and layout though.
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tula
Held my interest. Good start.
Anything to bring about more public awareness is a very good thing.
You do have talent as a writer.
Hope to read more.
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compound complex
bttt
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rekless
CC
Thanks for the complement.
I've had so many rejections from agents that I thopught I would blog it for awhile and get some feed back.
dan