I agree with the constructive critisism given by the above posters. I do think this argument is strong - law exists, applies to JWs, not followed, civil and criminal liability to follow. I think it would be even stronger if it was rewritten to be shorter, more concise, and much less of the "Jehovah & Jesus" stuff. Everything has to be written to be shorter & sweeter. People do not have 30 hours to read this, and, even I, rolled my eyes at the Jesus/Jehober paragraph on the website.
I can imagine a top journalist like Brian Williams learning about this story and going to the website where it is all posted. He's super busy and has to meet deadlines for publishing news stories. There are thousands of news stories each & every day to cover, and he has to be able to quickly come up to speed on the important issues. He wouldn't have much of a clue, or quickly be able to get a handle on what Steve Unthank is after. I really think a journalist would see all the "Jehovah/Jesus/Bible" jibberish and dismiss it as the serious piece it is. This website seems like it's written for the ubber-Jdubber with all the Biblical referances. We build legal arguments with heavy quotes from the law and court cases, not the Bible. This is a legal argument of a crime going on, and not a Watch Tower study article....right? I fear that worldly people are going to roll the eyes and slam the door on Steve. There are two weeks to redo this writing and website. I hope Steve takes the above posters as positive critique. I think they really mean it as positive critisim. Steve knows this the best, as he's obviously been working with this legal area much over the past few years. Steve, if you read this, please seriously consider the above posters. They have some valid points and want you to be a success.
As far as the potential fines, WOW! That could balance Victoria's budget.
Do you guys really think the Watch Tower is poor? Could Victoria fine the JWs and then levy each Kingdom Hall (owned 100%). They can also levy bank accounts, likely both in Victoria, Austrailia and around the world. While I don't know for sure, I would think Austrailia has a "full faith and credit" type of law that allows for extriction of money and people from other countries. What is $70 a year, a new suit or dress for the Memorial? Come on, the JWs can come up with the money! They do to buy magazines, attend conventions, buy dress clothes, and pay for Kingdom Halls!
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