Do you know about dialogue tags and action beats?

compound complex

Thanks, Nancy!
Yours is a good example of interspersing dialogue with narrative. You are showing what's happening and readers get a sense of the relationship between mom and daughter.
Good show!
nancy drew

Thanks for always being kind about it but I'm a grammar and punctuation idiot. I have alot of crazy ideas but i just write along with no rules getting in my way.
snowbird

It's called free writing.
You are very good at it, Miss Nancy.
Sylvia
compound complex

Nancy and Sylvia could work together as a writing team . . .