French Vanilla Morning (page 4)

COMF

Mmm... Robyn...

(spoken using best Homer Simpson "doughnuts" voice)

Special K

Hi Robyn

I really liked your poem...

Can I send that poem to my husband?

sometimes a really intellectual poem lacks what this poem gives..

"Feeling"..and "emotion"..

Nice poem.. robyn

sincerely

Special K

Yerusalyim

Robyn,

I just read this...

Ah, my sexy, French, Baby Face
Give up Yeru and run away with me, sweetest one!
Robyn

I'm suggesting me, you and French Baby Face all run away together...

wednesday

What do ya reckon it means?

just on a WAG(medical lingo for Wild arse Guess)

someone needs a BJ.

Robdar

Mmm... Robyn...

Comf.....sigh

Can I send that poem to my husband?

(((((Special K))))), I would be honored. But you may want to send the new edit:

In the small corners of the morning,

I think of you.

As the steam rises from my coffee,

I gaze into the cup

Recalling the love we shared

On a night as black.

Dreamy with secret reverie,

I watch the cream splash, mingle and

Swirl like the kaleidoscope in my mind.

When I think of you,

I gently lick at the spoon and blush.

I find it interesting on how changing a period to a comma can give new meaning to a poem. Don't you?

I'm suggesting me, you and French Baby Face all run away together...

((((Yeru)))) Done! Let's book a flight to Paris right away!

just on a WAG(medical lingo for Wild arse Guess)
someone needs a BJ.

ROFL at (((((Wednesday))))) I'd say that you guessed right! R

IronGland

alt

SheilaM

CG: Intellectual??? Hmmm Frost, Poe poetry is many things.....not sure if you want a full dissertation or what but a good poem stands on it's own.

Special K

Thanks Robdar..

I sent it to hubby's e-mail..

He'll find it first thing in the morning, when he's drinking his coffee at his computer..

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....There could be sparks from this one.... I'll keep my fingers crossed and I'll watch to see how he licks his spoon.......

The only problem is that now I have to wait all not .. in anticipation..

Anticipation is good stuff sometimes...

thanks

Special K

Robdar

IronGland, that is an interesting picture. Hmmmmm

What SheilaM said.

Special K,

I hope you have a very good time with your husband

Love,

Robyn

nilfun

I enjoyed your poem, Robdar. Really good stuff

Irongland, wouldn't Fabio would be an Italian Vanilla Morning?

Rodbar's poem is intellectually lacking.

Hmmm...I don't know about that..but I do know that it's sexy as all-get-out (unlike the phrase "all-get-out", which is one of the most un-sexy phrases ever)

French Vanilla Morning

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