Thats an awsome poem!
C.C
by Robdar 49 Replies latest social entertainment
Nilfun,
I am glad that you found the poem sexy as "all get out". Sure, "all get out" isn't a very sexy phrase but it connotes a certain passion and passion is sexy, don't you think?
CC,
Thanks! Do you write poetry?
Special K,
I'm sure you must know how curious I am regarding your husband's response to the poem. Care to share with the congregation?
Peace,
Rob
Hi Robdar.
Dear Congregation..
My husband did not receive my e-mail because he signed onto a different internet server.. and I sent it to the old server.. therefore.. we didn't make a connection YET !!!. although I've been licking my spoon every day waiting for a comment or hint that the poem was received... But alas.. it was not received..
Anticipation still building........and with my beloved's new e-mail in hand.. I now copy, paste.. and off it whisks again to the man of my dreams.........and in the backgound of my mind, I smell the faint whisp of vanilla a la francais.
wink wink..
special K
Tres sexy, Robyn! Can you critique one of mine? Here goes:
Twilight
lay me down
like twilight
falling softly on
your hills
and valleys.
I,
the sky,
and you, the earth,
on which nature made it right
to press myself
upon you
nightly.
Waddaya think?
Hi Robyn,
I am doing better...I love this poem...I looked back at the date I first replied to this thread and it is the anniversary of when I was hospitalized. (December 14, Many years ago).
That was a long time ago and I have come very far...
Thanks for asking...sorry for taking so long to reply.
eisenstein