Thats an awsome poem!
C.C
French Vanilla Morning
by Robdar 49 Replies latest social entertainment
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Robdar
Nilfun,
I am glad that you found the poem sexy as "all get out". Sure, "all get out" isn't a very sexy phrase but it connotes a certain passion and passion is sexy, don't you think?
CC,
Thanks! Do you write poetry?
Special K,
I'm sure you must know how curious I am regarding your husband's response to the poem. Care to share with the congregation?
Peace,
Rob
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Vivamus
I love it, can I keep a copy of it?
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Blue Bubblegum Girl
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Robdar
can I keep a copy of it?
Viv
Of course! Have fun with it.
Love,
R
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Special K
Hi Robdar.
Dear Congregation..
My husband did not receive my e-mail because he signed onto a different internet server.. and I sent it to the old server.. therefore.. we didn't make a connection YET !!!. although I've been licking my spoon every day waiting for a comment or hint that the poem was received... But alas.. it was not received..
Anticipation still building........and with my beloved's new e-mail in hand.. I now copy, paste.. and off it whisks again to the man of my dreams.........and in the backgound of my mind, I smell the faint whisp of vanilla a la francais.
wink wink..
special K
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maybesbabies
Tres sexy, Robyn! Can you critique one of mine? Here goes:
Twilight
lay me down
like twilight
falling softly on
your hills
and valleys.
I,
the sky,
and you, the earth,
on which nature made it right
to press myself
upon you
nightly.Waddaya think?
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Robdar
at Special K....I hope that your "Hallmark Moment" has an X rating......
Maybesbabies, I love your poem! The words evoke a seductive yet tender picture. May I keep a copy for my poetry scrap book?
R
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maybesbabies
You sure can!!! I'll keep yours too, if that's allright!!!!
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Robdar
You sure can!!! I'll keep yours too, if that's allright!!!!
Cool! I just wrote your's down. And yes, you may make a copy of mine. Rob
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eisenstein
Hi Robyn,
I am doing better...I love this poem...I looked back at the date I first replied to this thread and it is the anniversary of when I was hospitalized. (December 14, Many years ago).
That was a long time ago and I have come very far...
Thanks for asking...sorry for taking so long to reply.
eisenstein