A Short Story I Wrote, About Witnesses

by SYN 19 Replies latest social entertainment

  • LittleToe
    LittleToe

    SYN:
    Great to see ya, buddy.
    How are you enjoying Oz??

  • SYN
    SYN

    Hi LittleToe,

    I'm doing great, thanks. Joined a sci-fi writers group and everything

  • Leolaia
    Leolaia

    I wrote a short story about the Witnesses while I was in high school. Unfortunately, no one understood it and my teacher (and the Jewish head of the writing club) thought it was anti-Semitic.

  • SYN
    SYN

    Lei, that sucks!

  • SYN
    SYN

    *bump*

  • Big Tex
    Big Tex

    WAY cool story Syn. You took me completely by surprise. I thought the story was going in one direction but you swerved and took it in one that was completely unexpected. The character of Jeremy was a complete shock and very interesting to me.

    Good job.

  • jaredg
    jaredg

    i believe, i believe...great story

  • truthseeker1
    truthseeker1

    I really enjoyed it too. I like how you added the canary island volcano info. I read about that a week ago or so.

  • SYN
    SYN

    Hi guys,

    Thanks for your comments. I've known about the Canary Islands volcano for ages, and I'd been itching to get it into a story

  • seattleniceguy
    seattleniceguy

    Wow! That was a great story, Syn! I was totally captivated for the whole thing! Excellent work!

    SNG

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