Calling All Poetry Lover's

by HICFlyGirl 21 Replies latest jw friends

  • HICFlyGirl
    HICFlyGirl

    I am a person who is infatuated with writing. I use it as a means to express my feelings. However, I don't feel I have found my unique way of writing that expressed me on the paper as I want to be seen. I am asking help from all the writing lover's to help me with this task.

    I am demanding original work though, I don't want any published mum-bo-gumbo unless it was writen by yourself.

    But, I do appreciate any helpful comments.

    Thank you. Come again.

    HICFlyin-away-girl

  • Valis
    Valis

    How I wished
    my own faith
    could touch the divine
    If it were
    I would renounce
    all number of deity
    and find my visions in you.
    Surrounded by aquatic rings
    with fractal light bouncing about
    your essence engulfs me,
    ecstacy and epiphany
    fragrant smiles and a sublime destiny.

    Travis 1994

  • bikerchic
    bikerchic

    Roses are red,
    violets are blue.
    Travis is a poet,
    cuz his feet show it.

    There stinky.

    Kate January 2005?

  • prophecor
    prophecor

    So delicate the balance 'tween misery & majesty

    Genious & Insanity

    So fine the line so frail the cord

    As would be any two edged sword

    My best defense was innocence

    When once was I so cavalier

    What once was me

    Like liquid

    Free

    When all I'd do was run and play

    Tomorrow just another day

    Never a need to look beyond

    Five minutes more

    Time too

    Ignore

    Forever never need be found

    The moment now

    Suffice somehow

  • Simon
    Simon

    A Thousand Livesby Simon Green

    To watch the moon dance in your eyes
    I'd gladly live a thousand lives
    And swap a thousand "dreams come true"
    To keep that moment there with you

    To see your hair glow in the light
    Which floated from the moon that night
    I wish I could have seen your smile
    For more than just a little while.

    Alas, in case I scared away
    That moment I was scared to say
    My heart and all it longed to scream
    Afraid it startled such a dream

    But still, because I did not act
    My dream is still alive, intact
    And mine to have till old and gray
    That smile, that look, by you that day.

    (what a load of romatic twoddle ! )

  • Englishman
    Englishman

    The boy stood on the burning deck

    His willy in the water..

    Longfellow.

  • Mac
    Mac

    Damb, Simo.....that was good and I think I'm now falling in love with you...macrehard;P

  • Simon
    Simon
    Damb, Simo.....that was good and I think I'm now falling in love with you...macrehard;P

    Argh !!

  • Mac
    Mac

    Don't run from me now my sweetest.....you've nothing to ba ashamed of........ya knows how I'm a sucker fer a rhyme..now whip off that bandana and spank me with it Big Boy!!!

  • Englishman
    Englishman

    The boy stood on the burning deck

    When all save he had fled..

    Twit.

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