Calling All Poetry Lover's

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  • Englishman
    Englishman

    I think I'm still tipsy.

    OK, the proper version!

    The boy stood on the burning deck
    Whence all but he had fled;
    The flame that lit the battle's wreck
    Shone round him o'er the dead.

    Yet beautiful and bright he stood,
    As born to rule the storm;
    A creature of heroic blood,
    A proud, though childlike form.

    The flames roll'd on...he would not go
    Without his father's word;
    That father, faint in death below,
    His voice no longer heard.

    He call'd aloud..."Say, father,say
    If yet my task is done!"
    He knew not that the chieftain lay
    Unconscious of his son.

    "Speak, father!" once again her cried
    "If I may yet be gone!"
    And but the booming shots replied,
    And fast the flames roll'd on.

    Upon his brow he felt their breath,
    And in his waving hair,
    And looked from that lone post of death,
    In still yet brave despair;

    And shouted but one more aloud,
    "My father, must I stay?"
    While o'er him fast, through sail and shroud
    The wreathing fires made way,

    They wrapt the ship in splendour wild,
    They caught the flag on high,
    And stream'd above the gallant child,
    Like banners in the sky.

    There came a burst of thunder sound...
    The boy-oh! where was he?
    Ask of the winds that far around
    With fragments strewed the sea.

    With mast, and helm, and pennon fair,
    That well had borne their part;
    But the noblest thing which perished there
    Was that young faithful heart.

    Author: Mrs. Hemans

  • frenchbabyface
    frenchbabyface

    ... ...

    I wishe I could align more than 4 sentences to make one ... but Oh well ...

  • dh
    dh

    Once upon a wild blue ocean.
    I saw an angel drifting.
    Alone at sea I saw her face.
    She knew me.

    Once upon a wild blue ocean.
    I saw an angel drifting.
    Alone at sea, I saw his face.
    He knew me.

    Once upon a wild blue ocean.
    I saw two angels drifting.
    Alone at sea, I saw them both.
    I passed them by unseen.

  • FreePeace
    FreePeace

    I wrote this poem for my dad when he died in October, 2002. He was a dub, and our relationship was strained up until the end. This poem won an Editor's Choice Award and was published in a book of poetry by Poetry.com.

    Adversity?s Surrender: Requiem for a Man

    by Doug Kelley

    After the Rain, Calm quickly descends, The gale of Unrest no longer wins.

    Out of the Shadows, sweet Truth is discerned, Lessons ignored become life-lessons learned.

    The Tempest has indicted; the Man declines defeat: ?Your wrath equals not the renaissance of my peace.?

    __________________________

    For you Dad; I will see you on the other side. Doug Kelley October 29, 2002

    This poem is a tribute to my father, F. Richard Kelley, who died on October 29, 2002. He successfully battled the ?Rain? of adversity in life, and overcame it permanently in death. He learned many lessons?some repeatedly. But, he also learned a ?sweet Truth,? for he wrote, ?We ought not live in the shadow of our worst moments.? Adversity accuses humanity with fundamental failure?like a ?Tempest??but it could not break his spirit. He now enjoys a renaissance, or rebirth of peace, whatever that may ultimately mean. May we likewise grow beyond ?the shadow of our worst moments.?

    Edited to correct formating

  • LittleToe
    LittleToe

    My favourite "own piece" still brings a lump to my throat. LIke Doug's, it found it's way into a published compilation somewhere:

    Maelstrom of Emotion

    My heart doth burst asunder, when by thy grace it acts
    A confused piece of beating flesh
    Evoking feelings, not quite quelled
    Like entwined serpents, writhing, helled.

    Strong feelings, disquieting thoughts
    Trumpet forth with silent blasts
    Risk everything, or gain nothing
    Oh that by my strength could I silence bring.

    My chest aches, ill half suppressed
    Evoking mem'ries half revealed
    Mounting tides of mixed emotion
    Onward, forward, to destruction.

    To this I'll drink, with nothing sated.
    Inside the twisted beast arose
    Oblivion sought
    Nothing sated, confounded thought.

    LT 2001

  • fairchild
    fairchild

    I have my own poetry board on the web. Please feel free to check it out. You need to be registered in order to post. However, registration is free.

    http://p066.ezboard.com/bwelcomehome46213

  • fairchild
    fairchild

    Oops, I accidentally submitted my above post, wasn't done yet.

    I am amazed and pleasantly surprised. Some of the poems on here are really good. You go, guys and girls!

    As mentioned in the above post, I started up a poetry site, just a few weeks ago, and would love to see some of you share your words with other poets. My poetry site has a core of 6 experienced poets who help others with their writing. We mostly concentrate on formal poetry (ballades, sonnets, metric verse etc..), but also do free verse.

    My first book of poetry will be published in 2006, it is a collection of my poems which have been published over the past year by Parker productions intl.

    Here's a sample..

    Of Silhouettes And Diadems - Crown of Petrarchn sonnets.

    S1

    His restless spirit mirrors eagle’s flight,

    a trace of spills and slopes beyond the nest.

    He follows sunsets over lofty crests,

    with word-strung bribes to bait the fading light,

    but armadillos stir and claim the night.

    Two callused hands exhibit marks of test,

    rough journeys wind ‘round armistice and quest;

    each cobbled path sustains this stalwart knight.

    Lone days lie grooved by tremors of his stride,

    thin moss will tell he’s paused too many times

    to glance at ruined bulwarks mortals made.

    He’s found declining ancient stone and cried,

    a past is woven inside briar’s climb;

    adorned with carmine roses, epics fade.

    S2

    Adorned with carmine roses, epics fade-

    their fragrance slips between his cradled hands

    and nestles deep beneath the timberland.

    Tall chestnuts patch the trails ahead with shade,

    a blemished carpet routing his crusade

    in arches only knights can understand.

    Faint sunrays kindle soil in clustered strands,

    and sparkling walkways open toward the glade.

    The marble angels wait in single queue,

    they watch his wary pace confirming doubt;

    he walks across the pansy-coated squares-

    a tranquil scene of yellow hugging blue.

    While pleas insist to soar beyond the clouds,

    far heavens hold his citadel of prayer.

    S3

    Far heavens hold his citadel of prayer

    in destined winds that twirl effulgent skies;

    a peaceful glade awaits, dismissing whys.

    Tall brambles sway to ease his view- she’s there,

    her smiles dapple blush on timid stares.

    He learns from tiny lines around her eyes

    that life engraved a breach of countless sighs,

    though slender fingers sealed the seams with care.

    Between ascending eglantines she sits,

    resplendent trestles wreath her agate throne

    while flowers drip ambrosia on the ground.

    Her voice descends through hedge’s thrifty slits,

    vibrations dwell in pores of leaves and stone;

    soft welcome frames the silence all around.

    S4

    Soft welcome frames the silence all around,

    no brush can paint a picture of this place

    for colors never match the tints of grace.

    She talks about the seasons- green to brown-

    how time, enmeshed in nature’s slipping gowns,

    will birth relentless hardships mortals face.

    As answers drift like clement stars in space,

    she gently holds her knight till twilight frowns.

    On brittle burlap sheets the night has strewn,

    two silhouettes succumb to passion’s yearn

    in tender promenades of breath on skin.

    Forever seeks the hand that crafted moons

    while moments sneak between surrounding fern;

    they tempt the dawn but keep their stars within.

    S5

    They tempt the dawn but keep their stars within,

    for sunlight’s open arms are bound to show

    two pilgrims tracing paths of fate below.

    ‘My princess- day we’ve conquered, night we’ve been,

    in firmaments our souls connect as kin.’

    ‘Please kneel and touch the poppy seeds I sow,

    as both we shall return to scarlet glow;

    may footprints join when winter’s armor thins.’

    ‘My knight, walk safely through tomorrow’s whims,

    recall celestial gifts that bear my name;

    assume the robe of faith, exalting kings.’

    ‘When nature molds its vernal chords to hymns,

    the sounds will tremble memories we claim

    in blossom’s dance around the fairy rings.’

    S6

    In blossom’s dance around the fairy rings

    Those words have gilded every trail of need,

    while star-embroidered nights could only plead

    for moonlit strips of bark announcing spring.

    New skies erase the snowflakes winter brings,

    each flower reaches light beyond its seed.

    Among forget-me-nots and sprouting weeds,

    her grave is flanked by angel’s marble wings.

    A diadem- such gentle smile of pearls-

    pours crescent sheen upon this peaceful tomb

    where desiccated orchids kiss the gray.

    Too soon to watch red poppy buds unfurl,

    her journey folded inside early bloom;

    the princess added grace to God’s bouquet.

    S7

    The princess added grace to God’s bouquet,

    but earthly reminiscence still adheres

    to tender rains that mark the glade with tears.

    A knight bends down before her stone and prays;

    in elegies that paint her lustrous days,

    he softly cradles words she’ll never hear.

    Each wind that scatters warmth will bring her near,

    and breathe her name when firmaments delay.

    Her banter ruffled boughs in forest’s core;

    still holding joy these winsome laughs would send,

    the trees shed crystal leaves, dispersing light.

    An opus penetrates from distant shores,

    to seal her epitaph- ‘for you, dear friend.’

    His restless spirit mirrors eagle’s flight…

    Copyright © by Chris W. , 2004

  • fairchild
    fairchild

    My apologies for the double spaced lines in my poem. That's somehow the way it came out after copying it from word, but it wasn't meant to be that way.

  • Bryan
    Bryan

    Dimly Lit Room

    by Bryan Lee McGlothin

    Hear the wind as it howls through the trees

    The crickets chirping amongst the rustling of the leaves

    The night has come, the air is now dark

    Only now can you see with your ears, hear with your heart

    Inside all is calm, the air is now still

    A dimly lit room from the candle on the window sill

    All alone, you must live in this dimly lit room

    Waiting and wandering if your life will ever resume

    Loneliness is a disease that goes strait for the heart

    Leaves you wandering aimlessly, aimlessly through the dark

    You may wonder the crime for which one must pay

    I tell you now sir, this pain needs no crime to call in the day

    You may reach out for help, cry out in pain in the dark

    But in this dimly lit room you bleed, bleed strait from the heart

    Copyright by Bryan L. McGlothin 12/93

  • StinkyPantz
    StinkyPantz

    Jez-

    Wow..

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