Hello Smiddy, I realize my answer is a bit late, but I reviewed the letter you already sent as follow. Notice that I try to be a bit more blend so as not to trip the "Apostate" alarms in their head:
Dear
Jehovah’s Witnesses,
I
received your letter and I am pleased to see that, like many Christian denominations,
you take part in the Christian ministry that has brought 2.2 billion individuals
to Christ around the world. I also have a special thought for those of your religion
that suffer persecution and oppression in various parts of the globe. As many
other Christians around the world, you are a fine example of true loyalty to
our lord and savior.
In
this world, filled with evil, even the most well-intentioned organizations have
been infiltrated by evil and, sadly, your religion, like other Christian organisations,
have been the target of pedophiles. This has been well established by the Australian
Royal Commission into Institutions of child sexual abuse (ARC) which has resulted
in changes in policies in various groups, including yours! While your leaders
have not manifested their desire to take part in the redress scheme accepted by
most, I hope you incorporate further advises that were provided by the ARC
during their procedural review as some significant ones have not yet been put
in place.
Your
ministry is certainly important and no doubt you want to bring people closer to
God and to the values thought by our Lord Jesus. For this reason, I hope your
organization will be able to clear its issues unveiled by the ARC so that
millions around the world will be able to focus back on your teachings rather
than being troubled by the results of this commission in your regard.
Your
fellow Christian,
House
holder.