Unstopable ... love this letter, don't remove your excellent points,
but remove the superfluous print.
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What I mean is, that every little black mark...even a period ...
catches the eye!
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The more little black marks there are ...the harder the eye has to work!
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Tighten sentences but open it up with more paragraphs!
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All the best to you ... sounds like WT has lost another gem.
clarity