Submit your essay here! [Inspired by tula and changling's threads a bit]

by AK - Jeff 38 Replies latest jw experiences

  • Uzzah
    Uzzah

    A short segment from a novel I started to write about three years ago

    The bluish light from the TV set illuminated the Sorenson’s living room.

    "All seems to be eerily quiet on the streets on Baghdad tonight. This is just hours after US President Sullivan’s promise to use nuclear weapons against Iraq should another biological weapon be released against any target. The first attack against Israel was only 12 hours ago and rumors are everywhere that a domestic US target is next. Unconfirmed reports have put Arabic Coalition militants on US soil with access to nuclear devices. I repeat however, these reports are unconfirmed. This is Justin Blakely reporting from Baghdad.

    Jake Sorenson rubbed his eyes after staring at his watch wondering how many hours the family had been glued to CNN and the events going on in the Middle East. Removing his hands from his red tired eyes, he looked to his family around him.

    Marie’s long blonde hair hung carelessly down over her shoulders partially hiding her face. Jake could still see his wife’s face sullen with worry, cheeks and eyes red from hidden tears. Their eyes met briefly, a silent message transmitted between them. They both strained to get up, bones aching from hours of inactivity and weary from the emotional strain the world events had brought upon them.

    Marie turned to her two youngest children, Michael and Jennifer. She had to remind herself so often that they weren’t children anymore. Michael was about to graduate High School and had been accepted at Stanford University in the Fall. Jennifer was already a very mature 16 year old, her 17 th birthday coming up in two weeks.

    The thought of a family birthday without John caused her eyes to burn yet again. Forcing herself to be strong, she starts fussing around the living room, cleaning up the empty glasses and half eaten dinners. "Come on kids. I think it is time we all called it a night." She managed to speak without the strain showing in her voice. I have to be strong she kept repeating to herself.

    Jennifer, never one to let something remain unsaid, "Mom. Dad. Do you think John was stationed in Tel Aviv when the missile struck?" Silence hung in the room like a thick fog. Jake put his arm around his daughter, half for support for himself and half for her, his voice scratchy, "Well hun, we just don’t know. I am as scared as you are about where he was but I know this. John loves this country very much and would do anything to protect his country and us. He was willing to make a sacrifice if needed but John is too much like his mother..too damned stubborn. He isn’t going to let some germs bring him down. He needs to feel that we still believe in him and what he is doing over there."

    His speech finished, Jake picked up some of the dishes off the table and went into the kitchen. He wanted to leave before his family really saw the terror in his eyes as he thought of his eldest boy surrounded with death over there. As proud as he was of his son, he longed to have him back home safe in the rural towns of northern Massachusetts.

    Marie followed Jake into the kitchen, seeing him staring out the window into the dimly lit cul-de-sac. Her hands slipped around his waist and he turned into her hug. Not a word was spoken between them. After twenty years of marriage they knew each other’s feelings.

  • nvrgnbk
    nvrgnbk

    Nice work, Uzzah.

  • Uzzah
    Uzzah

    I thought some might enjoy the first part of this next segment (utopian fantasy) contrasted with the stark rawness of the second, which is partially the sub plot of the novel..

    Donald Lindsay had just finished washing off the dirt accumulated during his day washing windows. His janitorial clothes discarded in favor of a 3-piece suit.

    "All I can say is I am glad God is in charge and not Sullivan or any other earthly man. It will be interesting to see how god uses this to fulfill his prophecies." He says out loud sounding almost as if he is practicing lines for later.

    "Well I know the Kingdom Hall is certainly going to be packed tonight. It always amazes me how many think they can just come running back to God when times are bad. I don’t know how Jehovah puts up with some of them." His wife stated as she slipped on her floral print dress, the dress forming nicely to her chest and hips, coming down to her knees.

    "Gloria, are you sure you want to wear that to the meeting tonight. It is awfully short and somewhat revealing. I know you have great legs but it would be hypocritical if the Presiding Overseer’s wife doesn’t follow the counsel her husband gave to the congregation about modest attire."

    "You’re right dear. I’ve got another dress I could wear. Let me go check on Rachel and Leah just to make sure their clothing is okay. Can you check on Luke? 17 year old boys cannot be expected to know what is presentable or not."

    ….

    Under a crumpled mass of wood and steel that was once the US Army barracks in Tel Aviv, a US soldier slowly wakes up covered in dust and rubble. Corporal Leon Howe awoke, coughing and spitting out the dust that had clogged his mouth and nose. The air pocket around him was no more than 3 feet highl but did stretch around him about 20 feet in each direction. Clearing his mind slowly, he remembers being down in the basement of the main administration building with several other soldiers in the lounge area when they heard the air raid sirens. Then came the explosion, then nothing … just blackness.

    Now more fully conscious, Corporal Howe started to inch his way towards a flickering red emergency light. His hand touches something… a foot protruding out from under a fallen support beam. Hearing moaning from under the pile of debris, he starts to push items off to one side slowly uncovering the rest of the body of another soldier. After checking the man’s airway and pulse, he notices that the support beam has almost severed the leg at the knee.

    He stops suddenly, his head jerking to one side. Voices? Two distinct voices, a male and female…. Where are they? He calls out… as a rumbling is heard and the roof of the air pocket collapses all around him. Unbeknownst to him, his relatively quick death was a blessing compared to the slow agonizing death that was starting to show in the troops above.

    ……….

  • tula
    tula

    Rocks in My Socks and Coal in My Stocking

    11 If a son asks for bread [ a ] from any father among you, will he give him a stone? Or if he asks for a fish, will he give him a serpent instead of a fish? 12 Or if he asks for an egg, will he offer him a scorpion?

  • changeling
    changeling

    BigD and the Shinny Red Car

    When BigD was a little boy he was very shy and quiet. He had three big sisters who loved him very much but were rather bossy, so he sort of stayed out of the way most of time.

    His favorite Bible Story was Jonah and the Big Fish. And his favorite toy was a shinny, red convertible Ford Mustang. He loved that little car. He took it everywhere with him. He even snuck it into the Kingdom Hall in his little "Stoops" Jr. book bag.

    On a hot, sticky, summer day in New Orleans, BigD’s daddy took him out in field service. He didn’t really want to go, he would have preferred to stay home and watch the Teenaged Mutant Ninja Turtles, but that was not to be.

    So BigD stuck his shinny red car in his book bag among his tracts and handbills and off he went into the field.

    His sister Melanie went with them as well. Melanie was the bossiest of BigD’s sisters. She could not resist an opportunity to tell BigD what to do or to get him into trouble.

    After about three doors on a very hot, sunny street, BigD started to get antsy. He quietly took his little car out of his book bag and clutched it in his sweaty little hand. It was Melanie’s turn at the door. She knocked a couple of times, but nobody answered. She looked into her own book bag (a paisley patterned Stoops pioneer special) for a tract. She had run out. She then asked BigD to hand her one of his. He fumbled a bit, as he was holding his car in his fist, but he managed to hand her a rather crumply tract. "What’s the matter BigD, do you have something in your hand?" "No", answered BigD with a sheepish expression on his face. "Hmmm", mumbled Melanie, as she stuck the tract in the doorjamb.

    As they walked down the sidewalk to the next door, Melanie walked a few steps behind her brother and fixed her gaze on his right hand. "I knew it!" "Daaad, BigD’s got his stupid car with him!" "He knows we’re not allowed to bring toys in field service!" Dad looked down at BigD, whose eyes were already pooling with tears, and said gently: "Son, hand me your car please" (he was a very nice dad). Melanie, who liked to take maters into her own hands, immediately grabbed at BigD’s hand and snatched the little car before he had a chance to give it to his dad. As the day was hot, and BigD’s hand was sweaty, the car slipped out of Melanie’s hand and flew into the air. It landed right in the middle of the street. BigD watched in horror as, just as his favorite toy hit the pavement, a Buick LeSabre went flying down the street and crushed the little red car.

    BigD instantly burst into deep, heaving sobs. His dad quickly escorted them to the car, as the homeowners were all peeking out of their windows wondering what was wrong. Their dad took them to Dunkin Donuts and tried his best to console little BigD. He dealt with Melanie when they got home.

    BigD was not allowed to get a new car to replace his old one for a month, as punishment for bringing it out in field service. By the time the month was up, and BigD went to the toy store to buy a new car, he did not buy one just like the old one, he chose a blue Corvette instead. There was just something special about that little car and none other could ever duplicate it.

    BigD grew up, and his interest in cars became a passion and then a skill. He became an auto mechanic. When he tired of that line of work, he went to work for a car dealership. He quickly became the top salesperson and eventually the general manager.

    Today, he drives a vintage, Ford Mustang, red convertible, and he lets all his sisters drive it except Melanie.

  • changeling
    changeling

    Nvr: Well done!

    changeling

  • changeling
    changeling

    Uzza: polish that up and write the rest! I really like the premise, the contrast between the JW family and the other whose son is at war.Great juxtaposition of thought. People dealing with the same issues but from entirely different perspectives.

    changeling

  • tula
    tula

    (((((((changeling))))))

  • changeling
    changeling

    tula: I liked yours as well. If it's autobiographical I'm very sorry. Sorrow gives us great inspiration though, doesn't it?

    changeling

  • AK - Jeff
    AK - Jeff

    to all.

    Nice little pieces of artwork. I might see if I can find a bit of an old story to post here.

    Jeff

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