Growing Up With Violence

by compound complex 67 Replies latest social entertainment

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    It was not a light slam of flesh and bone against a slanting wall of the derelict cabin.

    Animal rage set its talons upon an unsuspecting, trusting child and sent her hurtling into the air and, upon impact with the splintery cedar paneling, edging downward, painfully downward by a stop-go motion that could hardly be described as sliding. Landed in a shocked but still breathing heap, she lay quiet until the beast left its lair. Once out the ill-hung door and into the labyrinthine wood that all but put the tiny speck of four rotting walls safely off the map, Mommy went to work. For the day. All day. The reprieve was, nonetheless, too brief.

    Liz knew what awaited her and her little brother if their rundown home was not sufficiently spic and span upon Mommy's return from work. Richie somehow escaped the brunt of their mother's physical brutality, however, and floundered like a drowning puppy under the muddy torrent of his mother's loose and vulgar tongue. Whimpering, he ran over to his battered sister, running his little hand up and down the torn sleeve of her dotted swiss blouse as if the magic of his youthful innocence would heal the bruises beneath.

    Elizabeth Vincent, nee Freitas, was staring out her bedroom window at the little stand of trees beyond the property line of her home on Hernandez Terrace. An evil, unwanted recollection of her beloved Richie had been triggered by some lurking, subconscious memory fiend. The trees, their compact density, something within an otherwise innocuous copse of oaks, grabbed inside the infinite and jumbled mix of memory and metaphor and shouted that Richie had died too young, that he shouldn't have died at all ... not like that....

    "Mommy, Mommy," Andy called out to his preoccupied mother, whose aspect had gone from pensive to dark and ugly. Growing within was an already sprouted bad seed of irrationality and wanton mayhem awaiting a deadly harvest. She averted her look from the seemingly real but imagined looped rope dangling from a distant black oak limb, and glared red, angry, frenzied at her own little boy.

    "Mommy, look what I made for you!" shouted Andy.

    Someone asked from what book this story was drawn. I replied that it was autobiographical: it's my story. The pain of a violent childhood leaves its mark indelibly on the heart and soul of a kid, and all too often, sadly, its stain mars the inner child's entire life.

    I deal with the above living nightmare, as well as with the pain of loneliness, unfulfilled dreams and shattered faith by writing and involvement in community work.

    How about you? Maybe this story is mine and mine only.

    Love,

    CoCo

  • compound complex
  • compound complex
    compound complex

    Dear Friends,

    Wishing you all a great day.

    Sorry there's no one to talk with ...

    Love,

    CoCo

  • goldensky
    goldensky

    Dear CoCo, your story has knotted my stomach. You're dealing here with the most sensitive chord in my heart, one that, when struck, produces in my innermost parts overwhelming pain to the point of insanity over all those who have suffered at the hands of their own parents. I thought it was just a story until you added you've experienced it yourself, and that really makes my heart bleed. I wish you'd relate your whole experience in detail, although I doubt I'd be able to read it through.

    You are such a gifted writer, CoCo! Your choice of words is so vast I had to keep using the Google translator.

    I also wish you a great day..

  • snowbird
    snowbird

    I, too, had a chaotic, traumatic childhood.

    I was able to reach deep into a well of spirituality that runs in my blood and draw up its refreshing contents.

    I walk and talk with the Savior daily.

    My hope is that you will turn to that Source, CoCo.

    I love you dearly.

    Syl

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    Thank you, dear goldensky!

    I was about to sign off, pondering my inability to get a reply. Maybe I just don't address my topics properly. Be that as it may, you are kind to set out your reassuring thoughts. Whatever you may have suffered, please find comfort in the joy of the day.

    My story can be found in Through a Darkened Pane. It's up now, a few pages back.

    I do hope to talk more in future.

    Love,

    CoCo

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    Syl :

    I, too, find comfort both in our Lord and in your precious friendship ...

    Much love,

    CoCo

  • snowbird
  • goldensky
    goldensky

    All these weeks I kept seeing that thread Through a darkened pane popping up, but when I clicked on it, I didn't seem to understand what it was all about. Don't many other posters take part in it? I thought you were all making up a story as you went along and it seemed to be so much fun I was sorry not to be able to contribute to it, since I couldn't follow it properly. How should I set about reading it?

    Snowbird, whatever happened to you in your childhood, you've come out of it as a wonderful conqueror and a very sweet person. I'm always pleased to greet you.

  • snowbird
    snowbird

    Hi, Goldensky.

    The poster, Ziddina is going to make an anthology of TADP - when she comes down off the mountain.

    LOL.

    I grew up in abject poverty with an alcoholic father and a neurotic mother who used to fight like cats and dogs!

    Church and school were my oases.

    You know, I have conquered!

    Thanks for noticing.

    Syl

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