Walking down the street, the trees were beautiful.
I saw the trailer peeking through the window.
Reaching the station, the sun came out.
Please correct these sentences.
by compound complex 75 Replies latest jw friends
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rip van winkle
Lol, CoCo!!! Walking trees!
Peeping Tom trailers!!
And what's so wrong with the last one??
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No wonder why I'm often misunderstood.
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I just realized you asked for correction! ( lol) Sorry.
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compound complex
Dear Rip --
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Please, come back; I understand you!
Best.
CoCo Disjunct/Adjunct
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Hortensia
Those sentences don't really have enough information in them. Who was walking down the street? Who reached the station?
Walking down the street, the trees were beautiful. Walking down the street, I saw the trees were beautiful.
I saw the trailer peeking through the window. Peeking through the window, I saw the trailer.
Reaching the station, the sun came out. The sun came out when I reached the station.
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rip van winkle
Dear Rip --
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Please, come back; I understand you!
Best.
CoCo Disjunct/Adjunct
CoCo, I'm never far away!
Thanks for understanding me.
There's supposed to be a storm brewing this week, hoping to capture some pictures!!! LOL
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OUTLAW
Please correct these sentences:
Walking down the street, the trees were beautiful.
I saw the trailer peeking through the window.
Reaching the station, the sun came out.
You`ve all been very bad sentences,Coco is upset..
Don`t do that Again!..
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I hope that Helps..
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compound complex
Thanks, Hortensia! Did you check out the link for further info?
Always good to see you, rip!
Bad, bad sentences! THANKS, OUTLAW, as only you can do it!
CoCo's happy now!
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Oubliette
One morning while camping, I saw a bear in my pajamas. How he got in my pajamas, I'll never know!
Outside of a dog, a book is man’s best friend. Inside of a dog, it’s too dark to read
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Oubliette
Walking down the street, the trees were beautiful.
I love to see trees walking down the street. It's not something you see every day!
Here are a few possible fixes:
As I was walking down the street, I admired the beautiful trees.
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I was in awe of the beautiful trees I saw as I was walking down the street.
I saw the trailer peeking through the window.
Trailers do not usually have eyes:
Peeking through the window, I saw the trailer.
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As I was peeking through the window I saw the trailer
Reaching the station, the sun came out.
This next one requires some additional interpretation:
Just as the train was reaching the station, the sun came out.
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The sun came out just as the train was reaching the station.
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Oubliette
Covered with hot melted cheese, we ate the pizza.
We saved the scraps of meat for the dog that had been left on our plates.
Covered in mustard and relish, I enjoyed the hot dog.
Covered in cream cheese, my friends will love these bagels.
After eating all their food, we put the cats outside.
Dipped in yogurt, many people love fresh strawberries.
I gave olives to my friend that I stabbed with my fork. (That’s one way to say, “I’m sorry.”)
...OUTLAW