Please correct these sentences.

by compound complex 75 Replies latest jw friends

  • rip van winkle
    rip van winkle

    Words!!!! Sorry in advance for what I'm about to say:

    Conjucts always want to join in!

    Disjunct is clearly defined but not essential. Guess I can keep it or throw it away!

    Adjuncty is addicted to subordination.

  • nancy drew
    nancy drew

    While cracking walnuts Stevie and Sheebie his crazy dog barked loudly as the ups man crashed into the door from the icy stairs. Sheebie raced to the door as walnuts rolled across the floor and screams were heard as packages tumbled to the ground and the stained glass window broke into pieces. In a panic Stevie fell flat on his face as the walnuts continued to roll and Sheebie began licking his face and wagging his tail.

  • rip van winkle
    rip van winkle

    NANCY DREW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL

  • rip van winkle
    rip van winkle

    Maybe the ups man was crushed from icy stares?

  • rip van winkle
    rip van winkle

    Here's CoCo's punctuation sentence in desperate need of correction!

    CoCo wrote:

    No dangling modifiers here -- just punctuation errors:

    In the 60's Bruce my friend used to eat his lunch mid-day which makes sense its noon. He always bought a foot long hot dog for twenty five cents and saved one third for Buster his dog who loved his master with relish.

  • nancy drew
    nancy drew

    Was that the same cousin Brucie a wmca good guy who played songs and ate hot dogs with relish in the 60's while wearing a big old yellow t-shirt?

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    could be, nancy!

    clue: one apostrophe and one hyphen should be deleted, with relish.

    cc

  • nancy drew
    nancy drew

    Apostrophe's and one Hy-phen deleted with "relish"

    Although there are times when we like to "embellish"

    So let's all be care-free and break all the rules

    Stubborn and crazy like grammerish mules.

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    Nancy's not a person to trifle with . . . ahhhh, . . . Nancy is a person with whom one does not trifle. . . .

  • Oubliette
    Oubliette

    Careful Nancy. Your WIBBLE is showing.

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