snowbird

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Do you know about dialogue tags and action beats?
by compound complex in
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greetings, fellow posters:.

before i give my own answer to the above, kindly read this silly little mother/daughter scenario i came up with for the writing class i teach.

it has to do with how to write more effectively.. thanks!.
snowbird

"While the water is heating up, I'm going to start on the dishes," Mother said.
"Why don't you sort the laundry and get a load started. Then, we can sit and have a nice chat over a cup of lemon-ginger tea and decide which rooms to tackle next. How does that sound?"
"Sounds wonderful," Mary said as she attacked the pile of laundry. "I will be out here putting things to right in the laundry room. Just holler if you need anything."
"Oh, and Mother?"
"Yes, Mary?"
"Thanks - for everything."
"You know you're welcome, child"
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Sylvia
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PIMO, POMI, PAMO, etc
by snowbird in
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pimo (physically in, mentally out)?

no.. pomi (physically out, mentally in)?

no.. pamo (physically & mentally out)?
snowbird

Amen.
Sylvia
8
Most Common USA County Names
by snowbird in
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washington, jefferson, franklin, jackson, lincoln .... does your state have an above-mentioned county?.

alabama has every one, except lincoln.. inspired by a sweet poster.. sylvia.
snowbird

I believe 31 states have a Washington.
Perhaps I should have placed this in Members Only ...
Sylvia
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Most Common USA County Names
by snowbird in
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washington, jefferson, franklin, jackson, lincoln .... does your state have an above-mentioned county?.

alabama has every one, except lincoln.. inspired by a sweet poster.. sylvia.
snowbird

Washington, Jefferson, Franklin, Jackson, Lincoln ...
Does your state have an above-mentioned county?
Alabama has every one, except Lincoln.
Inspired by a sweet poster.
Sylvia
161
Good Morning!
by snowbird in
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good morning, all.. it is good to be here.. thanks to all for your contributions.. love and blessings.

sylvia.
snowbird

Good evening/night/morning.
It's morning to my baby on Okinawa.
Sylvia
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PIMO, POMI, PAMO, etc
by snowbird in
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2. friends
pimo (physically in, mentally out)?

no.. pomi (physically out, mentally in)?

no.. pamo (physically & mentally out)?
snowbird

@ FJ, sad isn't it?
@ SD, seriously.
Sylvia
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Good Morning!
by snowbird in
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good morning, all.. it is good to be here.. thanks to all for your contributions.. love and blessings.

sylvia.
snowbird

That should have been initialism instead of acronym.
I always confuse those two.
Sylvia
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PIMO, POMI, PAMO, etc
by snowbird in
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2. friends
pimo (physically in, mentally out)?

no.. pomi (physically out, mentally in)?

no.. pamo (physically & mentally out)?
snowbird

ToesUp

Sylvia
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PIMO, POMI, PAMO, etc
by snowbird in
1. jw
2. friends
pimo (physically in, mentally out)?

no.. pomi (physically out, mentally in)?

no.. pamo (physically & mentally out)?
snowbird

Ok, LUHE.
***adding to list***
Sylvia
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Jalessa Castillo, a Jehovah Witness Pioneer, who joined The Orlando Times Team, maintains a 3.75 Grade Point Average at Valencia College.
by no password in
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http://www.orlando-times.com/the_journey_of_jalessa_526.html.

the orlando times.

home.
snowbird

Is it me, or does it seem that Black JW's are given a pass when it comes to so-called worldly pursuits?
Perhaps a good PR move on WT's part?
Smooth ...
Sylvia