I know this is a WT article but the priciple applies to their other publications.
To be honest, the whole of the NWT is a really bad lesson in the use of the English language.
A lot of it used to really throw me. I think that because they have 'fudged' such a lot of it and altered it so much, when you put it all together it just doesn't read very well. In fact it reads very badly and if that is so how can you learn from it?
Their criticism of the NIV and the NEV is well known but at least these bibles actually read coherently.