The Empty Cupboard

by compound complex 73 Replies latest jw friends

  • snowbird
    snowbird

    The Full Cupboard

    The large country house with a porch (also called a garret by the backwoods people) running from end to end contrasted sharply with the little huts sitting amidst the oak, pecan, pine, and walnut trees that landscaped section 35 of the county.

    The owner, a disgraced and defrocked pastor, spent most of his time on the porch preaching to imaginary congregants. His wife, a spiteful, materialistic shrew, whiled away her days in separate quarters, counting their money and thinking up ways to pester the younger women and children who made up the tiny hamlet.

    The house boasted a spacious kitchen with built-in cupboards and an electric(!) stove. The cupboard nearest the stove was always full. Always. On the rare occasions they were granted entrance to the manor, poverty-stricken neighbors would stare in envious fascination at the assortment of store-bought goods that filled its shelves.

    Apparently the man and woman never availed themselves of any of the goods because the goods never, ever diminished. The neighbors certainly never asked for any of the hoarded store - they were lacking in wealth, not dignity - and the children knew better than to think about asking.

    One child, in particular seemed to raise the hackles of the lady of the house. A little two-room school was directly across the road from the big house, and whenever the teachers would visit with her, this child's name was always mentioned with awe and admiration.

    The day came when the inevitable happened. The model child was called upon by the lady to run some errands, with a promise that she could have anything of her choosing from the overstocked cupboard ...

    TBC

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    Thank you, Sylvia:

    Very intriguing. Your writing, as usual, is impeccable.

    Please tell us more!

    CoCo

  • snowbird
    snowbird

    You, sir, are my soul and my inspiration.

    Whenever I read your writings, memories come flooding back.

    Syl

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    Syl:

    !

    TBC?

    CC

  • snowbird
    snowbird

    The errand on which the child was to be sent involved crossing the road, going up a steep incline to another old lady's house to borrow her churn for the lady of the manor. The two matrons were not on the best of terms, so the manor lady deemed it best to send the model child who was the darling, the pride, the joy of the hamlet.

    There was one caveat, however. The other old lady had a mean-spirited grandson who had an even meaner-spirited dog.

    What should the model child do?

    Would the tempting thought of having her choice of anything that the full cupboard offered trump the thought of encountering the hateful boy and his hateful dog?

    Stay tuned ...

    Syl

    LOL @ CoCo!

    I was looking up corbels.

  • snowbird
    snowbird

    Hey, CoCo, let's make a deal.

    As I'm sure you've already surmised, I was that model child.

    Based on your "read" of my character, why don't you finish the story?

    I would love that!

    Syl

  • compound complex
    compound complex

    Dear Syl:

    What an offer! Let me give it some thought through the day. I'll have to shift into a different gear in order to negotiate the challenging grade. Will post again after work today. Thanks for the privilege of being a co-writer!

    BTW, Ziddy's post forced me, as I myself responded to her, to explore new out-there territory. Can you tell me your reaction to the "Little Betty" denouement? I can picture it on film with the various dolls clearly showcasing the "real" Ruthann throughout her so-called life.

    Many thanks,

    CoCo

  • snowbird
    snowbird

    I LOVED it, CoCo.

    You would make a good psychological thriller/mystery/suspense/macabre writer.

    What did I just say?

    Syl

  • BizzyBee
    BizzyBee

    I see this as the introduction...........

    "A creature of habit, Miss Ruthann Delaney, a spinster of a certain age, you awaken on this most ordinary of days and seek the comfort of the familiar and the routine in your particular little world, where everything has its place and always has. But it doesn't take long for you to realize that this is not an ordinary day and this is not your particular little world any longer. Because, stepping down the worn stairs as you have since childhood, you are entering, not the cozy kitchen of yesterday, but a strange and unfamiliar room in the dimension known as......the Twilight Zone."

  • snowbird
    snowbird

    Bizzy!!!

    Syl

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